Alfred shot himself right?

8D.

Psychotic America is totally awesome...

I liked it~ 3

You know I liked the idea of it, but it was way too short, and just left well a feeling of not really being done well. It's like you had this great epic idea, and pretty much gave the reader a summary of it. America has an obsession with war, because he has an obsession with winning. Play on that, expand the story, torture the reader with Alfred's slow , but obvious downward spiral, I know you can do better then this, punch us in the gut with saddness, write a fanfic with the sole purpose of making your readers cry.

Make us sympathize with Alfred, and feel for Arthur, bring Matt into the story. He's Alfred's brother, yet try as he might... he can't bring him out of it. Damn, girl... there's so many amazing things you can do with this idea, do it. I know you can. Also sorry if I came out sounding mean, I just wanted to write a 'real' review...not just something like : OMG I LOVED IT, YOUR A GREAT WRITE * smileyface*