Very Good! Well written and a perfect characterization.

Richard Robinson

This is a lovely story, with a great premise. Very well done.

Lovely.
Your characterization is perfect. :)

Nice.

A bakery wouldn't be the best place for J'Onn, though, would it? All of those stoves and their fires? :-)

ayup, that's very... Luna.

where she needs to be, when she needs to be, saying just what she needs to, and confusing the heck out of everyone :D

oh too cool I love the thought that they are friends.

Intriguing story! I would be interested in seeing a sequel or is this part of how Luna knows that aliens exist in "Aliens in the Alley?"

Excellent little character peace. Yes I spelled it that way on purpose.

Beautiful story! Great job on a difficult prompt. I would love to see more one shots with these two through the years :)

This is really good.

A beautiful story! Is there an actual picture of this painting online?

This is certainly interesting, very emotional.

Such a cute story. I loved that you picked John for your one shot. I hope that you choose to make more stories like this one in the future.

I love the idea of this, it's so far-fetched, but their interaction felt so realistic.

Wonderful plot bunnies bounce around your brain.

:)

Hee. Some of the wording was a bit awkward, but Luna and J'onn are awesome together, and I liked some of the descriptions a lot. Luna shouldn't have explained. Also, what was the spell she cast? I thought it would be the portrait animator, but then there didn't seem to be anything magic except her knowing what he really looked like. On Mars. At what point did he switch from 'real Martian' to 'Green anthro-style superhero face?'

Well, anyway, either green version of him walking into Ottery St. Catchpole for pastries would cause a bit of a stir! Heh.