You haven't had Naruto improve at all, he doesn't stand a chance in any fight.

Good promise looks like it has been updated in for five years good read at least

is this fanfic over

why did you stop?

Hey, I realise you'll probably never read this, it was been almost 4 years, after all. Just wanted to say I really enjoyed your writing, and I thought the story went in interesting directions.

Even though we usually want a strong Naruto, it was nice to see that while the Naruto here was strong for his age, but he was still pretty immature and often struggled with older, more experienced opponents. I think your Naruto is very in character with canon Naruto, with hotheadedness being one of his strong character, though it is for this very reason that I don't think he's ready for chunin yet, despite his good performance during the fights, but we'll see how it goes. Thanks for the great story!

I enjoyed the original missions. It's great to see the team coming along slowly. Hopefully we'll get too see Gaara soon! Thanks for the great story!

The story seems quite promising so far. I never read a story where young Naruto was in a genin team with Hana, so I'm really looking forward to it!

THis is a unique story and while I'm sad to see it's been abandoned, I really enjoy the content that's hear. Good job and thanks for the story.

why is there so much fighting? I understand there is a lot in Naruto but this is way to much. You are going overboard and ruining the story. Nobody wants to feed a million different fight scenes. Just cut to the chase. Omg.

awesome

This has been painfully boring for the last 10 chapters. To make it even worse, you used the "complete the rasengan to win the bet" part. Ugh.

I will give you props for everything up until just after the chunin exams arc. That was exciting and fun to read.

Glad to see Konohammaru Corps were able to make Naruto stop moping and leave hospital.

It's funny to see the Toads reading the riot act to Jiraya.

Glad to see Mizuki was caught.
Let's hope the rescuers will come before Naruto loses somebody from his temporary team.