 Nefarious Seraph 13 2/20/12 . chapter 3Damn this makes sense. Helluva lot more sense than what Capcom hinted at. Great story, I loved it~ |
 Alianora Serein 1/12/11 . chapter 3What an amazing twist! A much better explanation about
Nero than the one they gave us in trhe game and in the novels. It really fills in all the plotholes left by the creators. (Whispering) Hey, is there any way we can make you the author for the background story of Devil May Cry 5? I don't want another prequel \(T.T)/ |
 Jazz7 12/23/10 . chapter 3I will eagerly look forward to a sequel if you decide to do it. Today was the first time in a long time I decided to revisit Devil May Cry fan fiction and I'm glad I stumbled upon your story. It was engaging, well written, and I don't know about the novel you mentioned in the first chapter but this is the best explanation for why Nero has the Devil Bringer and his connection with Vergil that I've come across. I also liked that you kept all the characters in character, including Dante's foul mouth and the relationship between Kyrie and Nero (something that is rarely achieved in other fan fiction for DMC that I've come across). Thank you for writing this, it was a pleasure to read. |
 IVIaedhros 2/21/10 . chapter 3Definitely a cool premise you have here. The intro was quite compelling, but I feel like you hadn't planned on taking it any further, but continued it on anyway...the reveal and change are simply way too easy and their implications completely unexplored. |
 Midnight-Somnus 2/20/10 . chapter 3Very nice chapter you got here.
My only problem is that this chapter felt a bit rushed. |
 Clairavance 2/20/10 . chapter 3The only jest I have with this chapter is the cigarette thing. Dante doesn't smoke, it's one of the things I love about him because it sets him aside from all the other stereotype bad-ass good guys who like to smoke it up in tough situations.
Other than that, this was a pretty good chapter, although I don't see the point in Dante fetching Lady since things seemed to have chilled out by the time she got there. I'll set an author alert so I know when you start this fic you're talking about, and I'll spread word of this fic to my fellow Dante (ugh, and Nero) lovers so you might hopefully score some more reviews.
Cheers,
Clairavance :) |
 Clairavance 2/19/10 . chapter 2*DOOF!*...that's me dropping dead from an overdose of elation.
Very, very, veryveryveryveryvery GOOD! X) |
 Midnight-Somnus 2/19/10 . chapter 1I'm really liking this fic so far. Keep up the good work. |
 Clairavance 2/18/10 . chapter 1Same here, I'd buy those novels just to burn them and have an evil vengeful moment.
I really like the take you have on Nero and Vergil. I'd be surprised if Capcom can come up with anything better than your theory for the next game, cos this is just friggin awesome.
Btw, your writing is really smooth. I was gliding through this chapter.
Look forward to the next update! :) |