| Reviews for Second in Line |
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   littlemsstrawberry chapter 1 . 6/14/2015 Love it. |
| memories.of.rain chapter 1 . 1/7/2015 SNAP. I love how you portrayed Zuko and his interactions with his father. *gives you a plate of cookies and a glass of milk* AMAZING JOB! :D |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2014 Wow these docs if yours always give me chills. Especially between Zuko and his father |
| ebonypol chapter 1 . 10/13/2014 Amazing u have such great insights to all the characters in ur fanfictions I truly love them :) |
| Squibble the WhovianBreadstick chapter 1 . 6/23/2014 OOOH, BURN! (which is a lot more significant in this family, just sayin') |
| PineApple-Hut chapter 1 . 6/18/2014 So true! :3 Man I love Zuko! XD |
| NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 1 . 2/17/2014 A very interesting look at a very dysfunctional family. |
| JannaKalderash chapter 1 . 1/10/2014 Sock it to him, Zuko! The wretched old fart deserves nothing more, nothing less. |
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 9/2/2013 Lessons he's learned, and truths spoken once, because they don't need to be said again. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 Yes! I love it! |
| Julia451 chapter 1 . 5/13/2013 You take a great idea and address it and develop it perfectly. The dialogue is great, the descriptions are perfect, the arguments and conclusions all make sense and flow perfectly, and I love your word choice and writing style. |
| ABundleOfDaydreams chapter 1 . 12/29/2011 :D |
| Kimberly T chapter 1 . 12/17/2011 Ozai, you have been PWNED. Well done! |
| Analie Janes chapter 1 . 4/9/2011 Awesome story! I loved Zuko's explanation of why he doesn't want his father's love anymore. That was a great connection and reasoning behind why Ozai was like that. I really liked how you wrote it! :) ~Analie~ |
| kataraw11 chapter 1 . 3/21/2011 Finally someone who gets Ozai's love. thank you awesome story |