Wow…that was so the symbolism

stunning. so beautiful...!

I love your stories. All of them are so intense and, despite their length, they have a depth few other stories have. Keep on writing!

Very good! :) I enjoyed the thought process going through Kuro's mind after Clone Syao hurt Fai a lot! :) Thanks so much!

oh, every thing you write is always so intense...

how indeed...?

a very beautiful legend and i think you wove it into the Kurofai plot line quite nicely. you stayed very true to the characters and your descriptions were quite insightful. i loved the last section when everything really falls into place. very beautiful...i can't quite get over the stone and the flower legend it really is something! thanks for the cultural lesson, i love those!

Having read the complete manga and watched all the anime's this past week my thoughts are full of this story. I was introduced to these characters through several Kurofai amv's that compelled me to read the work. Having completed that task in my usual single-minded fashion I have been left wanting... more. This was wonderfully written and I am looking forward to reading more along this vein.