| Reviews for With or Without You |
|---|
| chapter 15 . 10/17 no he has no fucking right and I wish Edward would just go the hell away and bella can be with garrett. Edward is a surgeon he cn move to Alaska to be by his kid I'm surprised he hasn't already! |
| chapter 11 . 10/17 bella should move! Like right now before anything can develop with assward. First off hes married. second hes never home with the wife and kid he has now does she think that will change if they get together? when he goes through a divorce that's a lot of drama for her to take on. why go back to a asshole who dumped you? I say fuck Edward Cullen. its the end of chapter 11 and Edward has given us NOT ONE REASON to like him. |
| danielle.f.scott.5 chapter 34 . 9/27 i've always loved this story. i've read it several times...reminds me of my high school love, 18 years later and we can't be in the same room without tension between us even though we aren't together |
| nurigirl05 chapter 34 . 9/20 Thank you, this is a beautiful story and feels real. It's the third or perhaps fourth time I read this. It's nice to read when a relationship ended, after some mourning time SHE move on and life continue and she can be happy with others too. Usually story like this, her life on pause while HE had fabulous life then when that one ended too, he return to her with his kids and she just take him back with an open arm, yuck! So yeah, is good to see that they still really love each other deeply even after lived with others and make it right this time around. Oh this outtake is beautiful too:) |
| boopgirl chapter 34 . 9/9 Great story. |
| chapter 23 . 7/22 Edward love more Bella than his own son, so sad. he just will raise another child than his own. super realistic |
| crazycats7 chapter 1 . 6/25 This is a good story, but it would have been even better if Tanya knew Edward had money and seduce him in college. And if Bella was pregnant with his baby Sophie. He would have been angry that she didn't tell, but not from lack of trying but because she didn't know how to contact him since he left her for his money grubbing, slutty wife. Then he should have found Tanya sleeping with another man and found out that Jamie wasn't his son after all. |
| ai se eu te pego chapter 34 . 6/12 Lovely story! |
| DICATAKADD chapter 33 . 6/12 I have been meaning to send a review / message for the last month and I'm finally making my ADD addled brain sit down. For the record, I converted this story into a reader program and my mom and I listened to it on a trip. We both loved the story...it was a happy ending that took a little while BUT happened realistically with bumps in the road and pain. In other words, they had to work for their HEA and it was totally worth it. Thanks! Diane |
| tinksauble chapter 34 . 6/9 Totally forgot how much I love this story! Had to reread it. Thanks again for taking the time to write it. |
| in-love-less chapter 2 . 6/8 I read this story a while ago, but is still as bittersweet. Please tell me you are getting published! You deserve it so much, please tell us about your original work! |
| twicrazreader chapter 4 . 6/3 Wow I hate when that happens! This is the point when I hope Bella becomes a strong college girl! Marie Twicrazreader |
| twicrazreader chapter 3 . 6/3 OK so no Jake that good! I can't wait to get Edward's background story! Marie Twicrazreader |
| twicrazreader chapter 2 . 6/3 I love that kids are happy even when the parents aren't! Child should never grow up! Marie Twicrazreader |
| twicrazreader chapter 1 . 6/3 Great opening chapter! Marie Twicrazreader |