Beautifully written! Well done!

Jesus, you had me worried that Murph was going to die. My poor heart. This was great, though. Spot-on characterization, I could feel their love for one another so strongly. Thanks for writing this and sharing. :)

i so love this!

Awwww, loved this! Poor Connor. Murph would so take a bullet for him and Connor would so react this way! Loved his line about how they go together or not at all. Perfect. :) Loved it.

awesome

loved to read it

So sweet. So good. More please!

Aww this was soo good! Great job sweetie! :D

Okay, that end was great! I loved the "I heard ya... I heard your voice in the dark and I followed it."

Just GREAT!

Excellent! You had me going there; I was not going to be happy if they died. But they didn't, and I loved it :) Great job!

~ml

this was so sweet and so perfectly them. loved it.

So sweet, so touching.

love.

kate.