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Reviews for: Black Melody
iony17893
8/15/10 . chapter 3
good story but right now i see that you are torturing kallen

i am suprised that she is still sane

after losing someone you love and then everyday remembering about

the one you loved... to me it would be hell

at least you put luke in the story ^_^

even though i dont get it why the story is about lelouch and kallen

if lelouch is dead

and why it is rated M...

still keep writing can't wait for the next chapter
John77
6/26/10 . chapter 3
Alright you've got me curious i like to see what happens next
wayland777
6/26/10 . chapter 3
i hope you update as soon as possible
Randy
6/26/10 . chapter 3
this interesting i hope you update soon
Leeko
5/27/10 . chapter 3
I'm excited to see what you have in mind for the upcoming storyline, since the dating has begun that ends the first arc, now I'm eagerly awaiting the second.
rii96
5/27/10 . chapter 3
Nice.
Leeko
5/23/10 . chapter 2
hope you aren't finished with this story :( Either Luke is Lelouch or he's gonna get his ass beat xD
Leeko
5/23/10 . chapter 1
Interesting, I'm curious to see the role that Chantal will play in this, also to see why this is an M rated fic.
YuUki PhAntomV
5/18/10 . chapter 1
Aww...no~~~~

Please make Lelouch alive hiks..hiks..T^T

good story ya now i quite like it..

Ok now i'm gonna read d next chapter..

See ya^^
rii96
4/6/10 . chapter 2
So, something like, Chantal is like NUnnally...So make Luke be Lelouch! Or you want that Luke and Kallen will have this relationship and Lelouch will just appear in front of Kallen, ALIVE and Kallen fell for Luke already and Lelouch was envious and jealous or something! Then, Lelouch tries to get Kallen back...

Fancy ideas again...BUt the Story IS NICE! Continue it and kalulu fans will collapse due to the intensity of the story!

¤kL22¤
rii96
3/25/10 . chapter 1
The story is nice! Why don't you make Lelouch alive and was just pretending to be a girl...or he turned out to be Chantal...

Please CONTINUE and I'll be waiting

-Xprincess|gentle-wing-
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