Love it. So very much.

I love this story X3 so heartbreaking

That was terribly sad. :( But great job!

I think you did a great job! It's short,sweet, and organized. ^_^

In my opinion, this was an excellent story. I didn't detect any spelling/grammar mistakes, and the plot was good. The one thing I might ask would be if you are against the idea of extending this story, or maybe more fluff. Of course we all know that L and Light are always at a shortage of love, so any is good.

Not bad at all! I love the last line about the third kiss!

Aww, it was wonderful! I absolutely loved the way their argument was like sword fighting; a beautiful metaphor! Very sweet, cute, and... and yeah, it was all-around good!