Gaara, Gai and Lee?
with no prior set up or mention?
a bit of a waste of a potential sub-plot, even if they all die sad deaths, building up to it would have been bitter-sweet.

That was truly a wonderful experience reading the fic. The darkness of this fic is absolutely of first rate! Darthemius suggested me to read this fic when I asked him for Dark Naruto fics, and I surely don't regret my decision. Awesome writing man! Although I certainly wouldn't have mind if there was a tiny-teeny bit of romance.

how do they know about arracner atm

Great story.

I'm not gonna lie that ending was more funny than sad. Kushina died thinking that there is the tiniest bit of hope for Naruto's defeat, Minato fought thinking that he had the slightest chance of victory only for that to be ripped away from him. I did not care for the OCs being made as strong as they were.

But overall good story. You're the first person that I've come across that actually completed a story like this.

Two issues I had with it though. Why and how did Sakura turn out how she did. If there was really something I would want to know it would be that.

The second thing; Neji had no business surviving for as long as he did. He was only slightly more useful than Ino. She herself was entirely ineffectual. Hiruzen even says so, in a more concise way.

If Gimmjow was going to off Jiraiya, he could have killed Neji as collateral in his fight with the old man. Then there's the situation with Starrk and Harribel. Why hype up all of the Espada getting second stages to their release forms if to the stronger ones are just going to get bitch slapped by Naruto's parents? That was just the biggest waste ever.

But over all of that, the Sakura thing is going to bug me the most. It would be almost as leftfield as making Hinata a yandere and not explaining it.

Haha it's funny because ino dying the way she did it reminded me of her words back in chapter 1. She didn't even release her sword.

The one thing that I will say since you said that constructive criticism is welcomed with open arms even though this fic is already completed. The notion of Naruto's friend looking at him unfavorably because of the simple fact that he died protecting his village from somebody that they were all cowering against because they could do jack and all Is a bit much to swallow. Who cares how he died, he died doing more for the Village than most of them could do.

Ino's comment pissed me right off. "Maybe his death means that was all he could do." Really bitch? And what exactly could you do? A whole lot of nothing? Kiba is just a dipshit how are you pissy with somebody because they died protecting you against an opponent that you didn't have a single chance in hell against?

Sakura is forgiven primarily because you clarified almost immediately that she was just angry at the situation and directing that anger inappropriately. Immediately recognizing this about herself.

I suppose that's what they're all doing, but it's just a little bit much to swallow that instead of appreciating him for what he did for them they piss on him, even Minutely, because he died.

What an amazing nove you have written! I enjoyed it from chapter 1 to 66.

Great story overall. Granted it is extremely dark and gruesome at times.
However. There is one thing that’s missing here. What about the last dimension that was not mentioned in the story. What about Hell? Sorry if this was explained in the manga (I’m guessing the stuff about the Soul king was cannon). Not sure if it was a plot hole or just me not knowing what I’m supposed to.
Great story, I’ll have to check out some of your other works.

Okay, you evolved them right, I’m still very confused however why you made it sound like all the adjuchas in the arena seemed to be afraid of the gillian in the previous chapters, and how the group of adjuchas were taken down by a horde of common hollows earlier in the story. I realize you specified that they were low-leveled adjuchas, but it’s well acknowledged that each Gillian is the combination of a thousand normal hollows. And adjuchas are the combination of many gillians. Therefore it would take tens of thousands of normal hollows to kill an adjuchas.
Other than the confusion, the story is rather interesting so far. I like reading stories based off of Hueco Mundo and hollows/arrancar.

You realize... that gillian are weaker than adjuchas correct? It goes normal hollow, gillian, adjuchas, and then vasto lord. Why do you keep making adjuchas afraid of gillian? Or stronger? It doesn’t make sense.

I was liking this story till you made Sakura the stupid bitch strong

Dude im only at chap 10
And I get what you where going for but... If it was anyone else it would have worked but Naruto has that special kind of dumb that makes it hard for him to be anything other then good
Look I get it hollowfacation would make him a bit crazy
But even that wouldn't drive him to be as deprived as you potray him especially if His compassion and love fires where ingnighted again the guilt from all the deprave things he did would over welm him he wouldn't be able to "just get over it" it makes him seem a bit Gary stu
Really if you had made it like he changes his aditude to not becoming a sadist would have been good
You never get "rid" of guilt it stays with you getting stronger the more bad things you do
This is of course a bit deddned by being a hollow but it still would be there
Shame on you

Greatest naruto fanfici ever read.. good job!

Funny thing really, i came here not expecting much, but was hooked in from the first chapter, this is one of the best fanfiction out there and its really amazing. great work :D