Green eyes ... the color of boogers? I should be offended, I think.
But I won't because I'm so thrilled by the way this ended. And bothered that it's now over! I loved it!
There were all these little nursery rhymes sprinkled in along the way (i assume to remind us of Edward's presence in her life always) & with twilight cannon references (lest we forget!). His deep love, sacrifice, and just vampire-ness were wonderful. And her ability to sacrifice her own rules (no lies), her anger when he doesn't respond and her anger when he does - that was beautiful. She forgave him, but it became another of her journey's - I'm so there with her on that. Thank you for writing an in-depth story of crazy sadness & love. It was believable and something I will carry with me for some time.

This has been such a long, slow burn...I agree with Bella. He's created so much misery in her, she's not even the same person she would have been without him. Let her yell, let him realize that he did her no favors by 'loving' her.
For quite a few chapters I was wondering myself if Bella Swan was crazy - creating this character out of circumspect. Glad that's not the case! Love the character's reviews at the end of chapters ;))

NOOO...there has to be more! I have no words. You have left me speechless. A very hard feat, I assure you. Thank you. xo

Poor Bella's world is a monster roller coaster. No wonder the girl is insane. I would be too.

"I hear you can never have enough cowbell". OMG LMFAO! One of the best SNL sketches ever. LOL...love me some M. Night Shyamalan. Truly love your sense of humor!

Nicely done. No fluff..thank God. Love stories written so well that they play like a movie in my head. Just enough suspense to make you want to keep reading without being annoying. You're a very talented writer. I'm so jealous. LOL

This was so well written! This was so engrossing! However, there was no Twilight. Bella and Edward spent 17 YEARS in New Moon. For Bella it was so much worse than New Moon. It did end up about the same though.
I love human Alice's dreams of Jasper and Edward, which ended up being true. I love her drawing, especially the one of Edward as Bella described it.
The picture Bella saw at the Cullens and the one at the museum was a great touch.

HAD to come back to read again! Wow, this story is just too good. If you still read these comments, know I am so thankful for this. I get chills in some parts. Read it all night long. I’ll probably find myself back here again in another year. THANKS !(:

very interesting and different. loved it!

I've just found this story. It's brilliant.

Thank you for sharing your delightful story.

Wow. I don't know how I just recently came across this fic. Your writing is beautiful. It's just the right proportions of expressive, concise, imaginative. I'm longing for more of this story. We didn't get enough exposure to Edward and you've left us all wanting more! We'll done!

Finally! They meet! Such an intense first encounter!

Charlie’s papa bear story is everything I needed!

Actually no. Now I need a Alice/jasper story or chapter.

Wow...Loved this one. Beautiful tale. I want more of them. It's been out there for so long, how I missed this gem?