| Reviews for Perception is Everything |
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annette-ella chapter 42 . 10/14 Great Story |
sp013 chapter 30 . 10/13 I know this has been published for ages but I think a trigger warning is needed for this chapter |
hypercell chapter 8 . 10/8 So I'm re reading this awesome story and I just can't help wondering what would happen if Snape figured out about the attuning in Harry's first year... Love this story! |
Guest chapter 42 . 10/1 Beautiful story! |
Guest chapter 42 . 9/30 What an amazing story! Thank you! |
English Major chapter 14 . 9/27 You have some excellent ideas and some unique plot twists that I am really enjoying. However, your English skills need some strict attention. One cat: cat. More than one cat: cats (NOT cat's). One Potter: Potter. More than one Potter: Potters (NOT Potter's). There are NO apostrophes in pluralizations. This is Primary School English you need to review. Belonging to one Potter: Potter's. Belonging to more than one Potter: Potters' (or Potters's). The possessive requires an apostrophe (with a few exceptions: his, hers, ours and theirs). The arm of the boy: the boy’s arm. Thoughts of the children: children’s thoughts. You seem to not understand the possessive case & your writing suffers from your lack. Learning how to properly use an apostrophe can only help your clarity. Thank you for your contribution to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction. |
BobSaysHello34 chapter 26 . 9/24 Who's cutting onions! |
Aspenleaf12 chapter 1 . 9/23 Just spent 20 minutes looking for this story so I could read it again! It's always great. |
Alex chapter 9 . 9/19 I thoroughly enjoy your ideas on how this would all work out it makes sense and I can really get into the story, which is a lot more than you could say about most fanfiction. |
Guest chapter 42 . 9/16 Really enjoyed this fic! The story and writing got better chapter by chapter :) I liked the characterisations and plot. Got even teary eyed while reading. Ah 3 |
Guest chapter 26 . 8/31 THIS IS GREAT! I love how Harry unintentionally became master of the elder wand. |
Guest chapter 42 . 8/25 This story is preoccupied with the "good guys" and the "bad guys." How about the "human guys?" |
Guest chapter 42 . 8/25 This is hysterical : "the boy who triumphed." It is also nonsensical. Harry is an adult already. Read Rowling. |
Guest chapter 33 . 8/25 This is frightening to read about. |
ttoolbox chapter 42 . 8/15 I lived this story. I stared reading it a long time ago but go distracted and just came back to it yesterday. I got sucked in so quickly. I loved it, the relationship development between all the characters. The way you realistically show Harry’s forgiveness of people and his struggles to not hold it agains the adults that let him down. Brilliant story! |