Reviews for Telos
Elizabeth Pricillia chapter 17 . 11/4
please continue
Parakosmic chapter 17 . 3/16
I found this gem years ago and just reread it. I'm so glad it still holds up! The characterization is on point and how you meld the two worlds together is so believable. What struck me particularly is Hermione's conflicting feelings towards the ninja world, and her interactions with Sakura. Also the hesitance to trust between the two groups adds an interesting tension to the writing. I recently visited your page and saw you're working on finishing it, which I'm so glad to hear! I look forward to what happens next. Good luck!
Ms-NotCreative chapter 17 . 1/26
ooohhh mmmmuyyy gooooodddd you NEED to continue, this is such a cliffhanger. This is so well written it can't just be stopped here.
stationchaosII chapter 17 . 7/28/2017
One of my favourite naruto/Harry potter crossover. I reread it once every few months because it is just that good
KittyKatt Uzumaki chapter 17 . 1/27/2017
Amazing! Please continue
Jj chapter 17 . 11/20/2016
Come on I've read this 6 times already hoping that the next chapter us updated! Do you even plan to?
Guest chapter 17 . 8/16/2016
Wheres the next chapter!
Guest chapter 17 . 6/17/2016
Updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
419Jhat chapter 17 . 6/5/2016
This hasn't been updated in a long time :(

It was good while it lasted though! Hope you eventually update some day!
twixxy-dee chapter 17 . 5/17/2016
I really miss this story; are you still working on it?
Secret.Identities chapter 17 . 4/14/2016
Why'd you have to stop just as you were getting to the climax? ;;
I really enjoyed reading. This is a lot more serious than your average crossover fic, and it's amazing how you made these two different worlds come together. Disheartens me a bit cause I'm working on my own NarutoHP crossover fic, and I know what I write can never be as good as this. D: No matter, I shall still write!
Some heavy devastation you caused to the Wizarding World though. Worse than Voldemort. You've traumatized the kids and even the adults for life.
And I was so pumped up for Naruto finally waking up with his memories! You made that happen, and that was great! But you didn't write the fight part and I can't read about the Hogwartians seeing just how awesome he is. ;_;
You know, I do see a few plot holes though. For one, why can't the wizards just use a portkey to infiltrate the barrier? They can't pass through the barrier, true, but they sure can appear within it. And... how on earth did the shinobi travel halfway across the world (emphasis on halfway and world) in one and a half days? They're shinobi, sure, but even they can't do something like that. How did they know Naruto was at Hogwarts? Tracked using the wolves? Again, halfway across the world. Japan's almost directly opposite the UK. And, assuming the shinobi could actually do that stuff, wouldn't they be able to spot the wizards right next to them in disillusionment charms? Disillusionment is not invisibility, after all. It's camouflage. You could still see an outline of the person. Surely shinobi can notice things like that, in addition to the shifting of the air or the impression of foot steps on the grass or even using that sixth sense that shinobi seem to have.
Sorry, haha. I don't want to just criticize, because I know that it's really really hard to sort out or explain the many plot holes that pop up when writing a fan fiction, especially with a crossover. Just wanted to point out what I noticed, and those things can be ignored anyways. So aside from that, the story's been absolutely amazing. Is it too much to hope for an update? :D
By the way, at this point does Naruto have the Kyuubi mode? Probably, right? That would be awesommmmee.
Secret.Identities chapter 4 . 4/13/2016
Whoa whoa whoa this is awesome! It's great how you explained the Hidden Continents such that it really does make sense.
Let me guess, Naruto sees the hitai-ate and gets a memory reaction? Then they decide to bring him along or something?
I wonder though, this means Naruto wasn't wearing his hitai-ate when he appeared. Unless the Japanese Muggle family that found him removed it? So... what's he wearing now? Not his orange jumpsuit, maybe a robe?
Guest chapter 17 . 1/4/2016
Pls update , i luv it
Guest chapter 17 . 12/15/2015
And thus ended an epic.
The hero dissapeared into the sunset (actually: behind the toad)
So sad.
DCosmicSage38 chapter 16 . 12/12/2015
You're too dramatic. That is my opinion wahahaha
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