This is my third time re-reading this story. It is great, but man I forgot how annoying the evolution version of rouge is. It's like she makes it her life mission to make sure everyone around her knows how horrible life is. I'd like to see her have a conversation with sasuke to see who hates life more.

Personally, if I was Fury I would have told Lionel he was wrong about outliving his enemies and put a bullet in his brain.

Is Kara really there to help Clark, or is she a minion of Jor-El?

Did Jean and Scott use protection?

Are you going to do the whole "Phoenix" thing?

Jor-El did not consider that punishing Clark could end up with Clark being killed or made unable to ever fulfill whatever Jor-El is wanting.

Stryker is targeting Rogue...that is a fatal decision.

Trask sounds like Hitler...so does Magento for that matter.

If Luther hurts Rogue, he will push Kal-El to the surface and that will mean death.

Mystique's group won one little skirmish, but I would not want to be her when Wanda learns the truth...not Agatha learning the truth.

I am surprised you did not have Clark start floating while holding and kissing Rogue. When is he going to discover flight?

If Rogue does not have her gloves on, how is holding hands with Clark not causing a draining?

I hope that Magento gets a beating for taking Illyana...preferably from Clark...and destroys his helmet in the process.

What is the situation with Kara during all of this?

What of Clark's ship? What of the stuff in the caves?