Oh ... this is looking to be good, I love when Sam finally gets a clue and goes after Jack!

Take the path. Of couse, Jack needs to complete the test in order to fulfill his destiny. And we now know what choice made.

I should have known you wrote from experience. It was very moving and I cried. I am very sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing.

Excellent story I enjoyed it very much ️ I hope that one day you might revisit it and continue on with them ...how did they talk themselves out of trouble...or what about their kids

Wow.

I found 'Spring Cleaning' a few weeks ago, and when I got caught up with that (again, wow), I was like, why don't I check out her page to see if she has any more stories?

I WAS NOT DISAPPOINTED.

So I went riiight back to the start and plan to work my way through.

You have such a great sense of drama and pacing, especially as this was your first fic! Amazing. And an incredible imagination! So inventive, I wish I could think up plot lines like that! I just read the last about 10 chapters in one go, I couldn't put it down! Very much looking forward to reading more of you. Keep writing!

They say a good writer should pull on their own life experiences and you clearly have done that in this chapter. It takes courage to write so openly about something so close to ones heart and you wrote it so beautifully. Thank you for sharing.

Oh wooooooooooow, I really, really loved this story. You could never tell it is your first, but it is definitely different. And hey... where is that sequel ;)

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Oh wow

LOL :) hehehe

Oh, loved this chapter :)Just you wait Jack ONeill ;)

Wow, I never read this one. How is this even possible, LOL. Am so happy that I found it. I have no doubt it is a great story, just as all of yours are :D Have to read something while I wait on new chapter of "Surebu" ;) (winks and hints)

Well, it's not like I doubted for even a second that they will eventually choose each other, but it's still nice to see that they have indeed done that!
One thing I just couldn't stop laughing at was Tadeusz.. .Every time you wrote about this guy, I had the image of my middle school history and politics teacher, whose name was Tadeusz, dressed in some sort of a crazy, colourful outfit and wasn't able not to laugh! Although, Marge Simpson's hair was good, too!
Thanks for this story!

I love this story just as much as the first time I read it. I really love your long epics. Thanks.

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