I like it. Please continue its really good so far.

Asya, darling, I believe we've been over this, but I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!

Write more!

Holly (The Fiona to your KC :))

YAY! I love it! I LOVE Clare's concern for Jenna in this and how it just sort of overrides any animosity that she might have torwards because of the whole KC thing. It's a very believable thing for Clare since she loves to help people and Jenna is someone she used to care/cares about.

I see you're running with that S10 promo as well. Tbh, I could see Clenna talking again, but I'm not sure if the would soothe things over THIS fast. I'm no expert in how ex friends react to seeing each other after what something like Clenna went through occured, but with the way you tell things, I can see that happening. Humor is really the best medicine. This story most definitely deserves another chapter because you have something big with this opening one...