Great chapter! I loved the interaction between Julia and Ace. I can't wait to see how that relationship unfolds (now that we know his love is driving him mad).

Haha! You took a classic Shakespearan route! I'm excited to see what you do next!

I like Zoro and Julia. It's nice to see the crew members. Your description of the flowers and the quiet embarrassment of Ace seeing Julia was well played.

You'd improve alot if you paid a little more attention to comma placement. Other than that, it's very good!

GREAT NEW CHAPTER

Greeat sstory please keep updated love it thx for new chapter:)

Nice post!

I love pirates, so I love this setting. The ending seems a bit rushed in relationship to the opening. Nonetheless, I'm liking this story!

haha It's kind of funny that my name is Julia too XD and Zoro's my favorite character ever so it's fun to read this D

Julia? I think I like her though I don't like the name XD

But what kind of reason is that right?

Hmm, looks like a good story, keep it updated :)