| Reviews for Fountain of Youth |
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annaharding chapter 1 . 4/14 Awwww! |
tin-a-holic chapter 1 . 6/12/2014 Oh my Ozma. That was sooo beautiful. how unbelievably refreshing of seeing the constant doubts that usually race through my mind (female) in male point of view. the scenes the imagery just absolutely beautiful. thank you |
Kiryki chapter 1 . 2/6/2014 /SCREAMS LOUDLY THIS IS SO CUTE THESE ARE SO CUTE HELP |
NattyWest chapter 1 . 7/17/2011 Love, love, love. This story was absolutely beautiful. |
Lai Jun Chen chapter 1 . 10/30/2010 so that was great! |
Terriah chapter 1 . 10/3/2010 love :) x |
forestofmyown chapter 1 . 8/20/2010 That was b. e. a. u. t. i. f. u. l. Aw man, I almost started crying, it was so sweet and pretty. Dang, you should write much more often! |
Scarlet Garter chapter 1 . 7/20/2010 Nicely written and very touching. Scarlet G |
Eishexe chapter 1 . 7/10/2010 Completely speechless right this is just...WOW! |
GoldenRoya chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 You know, you really ought to do mush more often. This was so sweet! The ending... it was really the cap to everything. Brava. And because I can't resist: Glitch: Boy, it got dark all of a sudden! Ambrose: *groans* Okay, what did you do to Cain THIS time? Glitch: Nothing. Ambrose: You stupid clutch of synapses, don't think I won't excise you if you push me...! Glitch: It wasn't Cain! Ambrose: *all patience* Okay... then who...? Glitch: *mumbles* askephelphrish... Ambrose: Glitch...? NOW! Glitch: *sighs* Azkedellia Ambrose: *squeaks* Azkedellia? Glitch: *sheepish nod* Azkedellia. Ambrose: ...Where exactly are we? Glitch: Under a teacup. She shrank me. Us. Ambrose: Shrank? Glitch: Yep. Ambrose: I'm outta here. Glitch: Hey! You can get us out of this! Use that big brain for something! You promised! Ambrose! Ambrose: I promised to guard us against Cain. With Az, you're on your own. *vanishes* Glitch: ...boy, it's dark in here... |
Sic Vita Est chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 Another brilliant one-shot. :) I particularly liked tiny-Glitch. hehe :) |
CurlyHairedDisaster chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 Awww. That was cute. You took a very depressing tale (I haven't heard that particular one in ages, btw) and made it end happily. Yay! |
KLCtheBookWorm chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 The young Wyatt Cain, who's shade abruptly slaps his older self's hands off the reigns and decides it's about time someone stopped thinking all the time and got around to actually doing something. - AMEN! It's been a while since a fairy tale has been from Cain's POV, so this was a welcome change. :) |
Helen175 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 Aaw! That was just adorable. When you said it was smushy I was slightly worried at possible cringe factor, but of course it had none. A lovely little oneshot. But don't forget about Courting officer Gulch please! |
Onora chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 You're a busy little beaver now aren't ya? :) You've been churning out stories faster than Steven King. It's a great story. |