more plz

O my... Yep... I'm crying.

That hit SO very close to home for me... My bro was over seas for awhile... There was a time that I practically "died" cause he wasn't responding. . can't say more lol.

Great job! ... Still tearing...

It's so good but so very sad. I wish you would continue it:(

Oh- after the amazing detail in the first of the trilogy, I was expecting a little more. This was good- excellent, in fact, but a few more clues as to what happened, what exactly Charlie was doing... just, more, I guess, lol.

But, I love this too!

This was fantastic! I've been waiting in great anticipation for a sequel to ur amazing story and I truly hope there is going to be one. I hope it doesn't end this way. This was extremely well written(as always) but it made me so sad to see Don throwing away his last reminder of his brother. My naive mind is hoping everything will work out in the end even though everything is currently and completely f***ed up. Pls add more!

Good stoy just a lot of unanswered question. The dream sequence was alright. I hope you think about adding a chapter or writing another story to close up a lot.

Oh my, lovely but extremely sad. It leaves me with a lot of questions too. I can

understand Charlie's being recruited for his brain but why and how on earth did he start

carrying a gun?

There was one descriptive chapter early on that was beautiful. The images brought

to mind were so nice, so peaceful.

Thank you.

Loved it!

Don's dream seemed so real that until the very words it didn't even occur to me that it was not real.

Charlie's story is sad, but in this way he is the stronger brother, the protector. I do wonder where's Donovan?

Well done!