 Jenna53 10/18/10 . chapter 1Very nice. I wish there was more. Thanks. |
 CleverCover 10/6/10 . chapter 1This...this is what I was thinking about sitting at Microsoft Word but could not get out into a decent story. The plus side is that this is more than decent. It's frikkin awesome. It's just...I have no words. I just love it.
This just blew my mind. It's everything that I would have wanted the new femShep Vanguard (formerly a soldier) to do and say and exactly how I would have wanted Kaidan to react (with just enough fluff to overpower the angst and give hope).
Thank you so much. It's good knowing there are other people who wondered the same thing I did about a Shepard with biotic powers where there was none.
Am I the only one that went "Dammit Tali" when she walked in the room? Really, just a few more minutes. Just wondering. |
 Sundanze 10/1/10 . chapter 1Aren't you forgetting that Shepard is a spectre? |
 ilmiopassato 9/2/10 . chapter 1Nice oneshot. I'm ashamed to say I squeed like a total fangirl when Kaidan mentioned a ring, lol. *wishes in vain for an awesome fluffy proposal ending to ME3* |
 AJ Rayne 8/9/10 . chapter 1Great characterization. Loved this story. |
 Natalie Parr 8/4/10 . chapter 1Very sweet and lovely story without being overly so. I really like your dialog and the touches of humor. I think you captured the characters well. |
 Nightodie 8/3/10 . chapter 1That was Just Beautiful. I love how you got the perfect reason for Shepard to contact Kaidan. Stress and angst... you have it all.
Thank you. |