I loved it so far! Gerry was really creepy, though. I don't know why but I imagined him as Russell Crowe (which made it even creepier I guess).
Your writing is really good, so I'm looking forward to the next chapters!

Hey, I'm enjoying the story so far, but I think you should change the part of Dean's internal dialogue to say "fuck" or something other than "rape". Especially after that Gerry guy was talking about having what he wanted no matter what .

Hey.

Ehm, how to put this ... I know I am really really annoying ... may not seems so, but I've written comment on this on Deviantart and also here before. The thing is just so simple as this: Me (and surprisingly not expected even) my friend got really kind of "slightly" obssessed with this story and all we want to know is ... WILL YOU EVER FINISH THIS?

We both realise this must be hard ... I mean, this is probably the best smut I have ever read (and this just sounded out really really weird, but whatever). And I realise it must be hard to both write it and also overcome yourself in every chapter as we all know every other chapter should be better and better. I know it must be almost freaking impossible to come up with other ideas and especially the good ones (I write a bit too, so I know), but we just want to know, if there is any chance of finishing this up or is it already forgotten? We just need to know if we should move on, or is there still a fading light of hope, a beacon of chance this might be finished someday... Because we would definitely love to see this finished! I am not kidding! And I swear I do not bombard other authors with so many comments (usually it's just one or two).

So I say it again, keep your time in writting, if you are writting next too chapters. All we want to know is: YES or NO? ... I mean it's just, this chapter was uploaded like 2 years ago or so? So it seems like a pretty abandonned story - which is honestly, real shame, in my opinion.

Well, what's left to say? Lots of love, have a lovely day and I hope everything is ok on your side of world! Cheerio! ;-)

Are you going to update?

Hey!

So ... this was really really really ehm ... interesting ... chapter. I mean I love the whole story, especially how Cas is apparently very much aware of how Dean feels in his presence. But this chapter ... wow! This was something I havent expected at all. Truthfully, I cant even imagine how the next two would be like when this one was so ... well ... how to put it ... arousing?! :D :D :D

Anyway! Ehm, I couldnt but notice you have written this quite a time ago and I am just wondering, if you are plannig to finish this story. Because it is really good story and it would be shame if it was left abbandoned. :-/

This is great! Please continue!

ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS? WHY HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED THIS?! AAAAHHHHHHHH

*.* oh alig várom a folytatást!
Hajrááá!

FINISH THIS PLEASE OMFG IT'S BEEN YEARS, I NEED THIS FROM YOU UGHH

OH GOD NO WHY ISN'T THERE ANYTHING AFTER THIS CHAPTER?! I really enjoyed this fic so far, I do so hope you'll finish writing it eventually!

Ok I loved this so much, The fic all together, and Well I just adored the Smut XD , But where are the final 2 chapters :/ ?

Okay i dont even know if you are writing on ff anymore but i had to tell you what an awesome story this was! Like one of the bestest smuttiest yummyist omg so freaking hot ff stories ever! Well played castiel!

OMG I got a shout out :swoons: ok, this was...it was...oh was...ungggghhhhhhhh
it was damn hot good and I need a cigarette now :D :D.

Helló! Csak most találtam rá erre a történetre és látom, hogy jó ideje nem frissítetted, de én nagyon kíváncsi vagyok a folytatásra. És ez igaz a többi írásodra is. :)

DA-YUM !