I gotta say, I kind of wish Pete referred to himself as Pete- since he prefers Pete, he probably thinks of himself as such.
But I do like how Pete's just out of fucks to give about Gary. He can kind of sense what Gary's doing, I believe, but it's still funny to watch Gary get his panties all in a twist about it. Dude's fucking hilarious!
SO YES good story is good.

I love this story, you're a fantastic author! Please update soon..

PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY IT IS SO AMAZING :D

Ehi, I know it's pretty late for asking for an other chapter, 'cause your last update was on the passed 2011, but- I've just entered in this 'fandom', and while I was searching for a good fanfiction I found this one, that I totally loved and enjoyed a lot! ;x;) So knew that, when and if you'll decide to continue this ff in future, I'll surely be here to read it! ;x;) 3

Please continue! I love your story sooo much! Heh heh, gettin' into Trent/Kirby? Niiiice xD I'm startin' to :ike that parin' too xD Keep it up!

Please update soon! I love this story so far, and you're writing style makes it even better :) I like jealous Gary~ :3

That's kawaii!

Petey: Mum,mum! Can I keep him? *hugs Gary and pouts*

Gary: ...

Mum: ...-faints-

Petey: I take that as a yes. *nuzzles onto Gary*

Gary: hehe

I'm so excited how things are being set up, its so conveniant 3

Lol Gary is gonna b pissed when Jim starts to get too close to Pete

This fic just made a turn for the better. Jealousy is the BEST incredient for a fic lk this :3

Exellent!

Barnyard animals? Cracks me up xD

Facepalm

So much for Jim being Petey's knight in shinning armor lol "...wait! Don't leave me with them!"

ROFL

This chap makes me want to play the game all over again,and again,and again...xD

omg an update? I was convinced this story had died - you don't know how happy I am that it's not! As usual your characterisation is great, and the plot jst keeps getting better!

I really like this story, it's crazy and long and has a ton of different pairings (my favorite being GaryPetey) But i like it, and i look forward to seeing another update.

I'll admit i had to reread it to remember the plot, but i would definitely love to read more!

I love you and this fic so much. I hope you update soon!

please, please, please! Update! This is so cute and amazing!