Reviews for Myrddin Emrys Returns
Khatix chapter 31 . 10/26
Your making the same mistake as cannon and most fanfic authors. The blood wards are USELESS because Voldermort was resurrected with Harry's blood. If he can touch Harry then the blood wards wont stop Voldermort.
Khatix chapter 30 . 10/25
ANOTHER major plot hole just to move your story, her use of a blood quil is grounds to get her arrested and fired. So easy, have a few Auror's invisible and arrest her as soon as she has the muggle born use the quil. They keep her in a cell, emergency session and leak the story to the prophet...the end no more umbitch. You just made Harry and more importantly Daphne into blood bigots because they didn't use the law to save the muggle borns.
Khatix chapter 10 . 10/25
Why the fuck is he taking Divination when he could be taking Runes or Arithmency with Daphne instead. Just because its easy is a MORONIC excuse that Daphne would not let him use or take the class with how she is portrayed. Also he senses something off with padfoot but not Wormtail?!

Authors liKe you give AU fanfics a bad name, you change his history and yet make him follow cannon that leaves open MAJOR plot holes with bullshit reasons. The ONLY reason he is in cannon divination is because "Plot" about the Grimm aka Sirius and the prophecy at the end.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7
good
Guest chapter 32 . 9/29
Don’t know what to say . Except stay calm and carry on . Smile more just keep smiling.
CSPTolkien chapter 21 . 9/22
This is getting a tad bit homophobic.
Enjoyfanfiction chapter 34 . 9/21
Chapter 34 Lady of the Lake

I love your story however I found this:

"Very good." said Dumbledore with a smile. "With the- unfortunate demise of Bellatrix Lestrange, Lord Black...

"Yes," said Snape, … Narcissa, and Bellatrix called by my home yesterday evening. Cissa asked me to help Draco with his task.

This would be impossible.
renextronex chapter 4 . 9/2
I think you are over-romanticizing Merlin, you described him before as a warrior, in the 6th century life was something incredible cheap so the notion that he hesitates to take a life a laughable
kaixbi chapter 40 . 8/17
i don't like muggle type war...its wizard war for god sake man
kaixbi chapter 23 . 8/17
cedric going to kiss him...wow...what a mind...ewwwwewww
Paddybee chapter 33 . 8/7
Please research the difference between ordinance and ordnance.
sairen629 chapter 33 . 8/6
I thank you on behalf of the black mamba for using it as the weapon to kill the deatheaters as to why I'm thanking you simple my Patronus is a black mamba and I feel kinship with the snake so to see it used not for nefarious purposes but for justice does my Hufflepuff heart proud so I thank you for using the snake upon which I draw my closure as a weapon of Justice and of Duty and I wish you well and and if you're dead this is just going off to ether if you're alive I wish you a clean bill of Health and have a pleasant night and day night week month and year
Alexander XVIII chapter 28 . 7/19
I wanted to make something clear for anyone who has the idea that changing one thing would change everything: in the theory of infinite universes, one popular example is that one universe could be the exact same copy of another universe, save one little tiny detail; for example, when you wake up one morning in your life, you eat breakfast in one universe and you decide not to eat breakfast in another; that's all that has to change to be another universe. That's also why the theory is called INFINITE UNIVERSES - it is 100% impossible to calculate the number of possible paths, because countless universes are added to the tally each second. For the record, these events in Harry's life are not so insignificant, like Harry having Myrddin Emry's soul, or the actions of building his power strong before the Graveyard scene, but Voldemort HAS to return to be a major antagonist in any story, and a very popular way to do it is through the Graveyard scene, while changing a few details, like Cedric almost being saved, or how Cedric did not ask Harry to save his body. I for one think this story so far has been very well-written, and while I have discovered this story far after the time in which it was being updated, I still believe that if you want a full change story, and are dissatisfied with the changes made in this one (beautifully written, by the way, General Obi-Wan Kenobi SIYE) you are more than welcome to search for another story on this site that fits your wishes. There are almost 800k other ones at the time of writing this, for God's sake.
Doobie78 chapter 41 . 6/30
I've read this story 3 times now and enjoyed it every time. Thank you for donating your time in order to bring joy to the rest of us.
acmcnabb chapter 28 . 6/29
Well I love this fic, even tho it has harry as powerful, it's not over the top, it's not him having 71 lordships and 71 wives, or meeting Daphne at a young age and being in love and together at 11, uve kept them to a more realistic level. So I think it's great and u should just ignore those idiots who want to bash a story cuz they have nothing better to do..
1,834 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »