Wow, this was beautiful and thought-provoking. I loved the first-person narrative.

I enjoyed this story very much! I especially liked the different points of view from each character. I think you caught all of their voices quite well.

Wow. This was really good. It gives a good retrospect on past adventures and all the possible after-effects people have probably had after the Doctor/anyone comes through. Really good story line and run through- good job :)

I really liked this ! I especially liked it being told from a revolving first person point of view.

Well done !

Great stuff, love it. I love the way you wrote in the first person, which is something I'm useless at.

Ahh this was immense. A great look into the implications of what they do for species who just don't understand them. Don't care too much for MArtha and Jack whump, but the Doctor whump was fantastico! (though admittedly not for him) :o

Consider yourself added!