loved this

A great story. Very well written.

Good for Aragorn, standing up to it like that!

I like Aragorn's dialogue. I'm sure he was tempted many times, but he never weakened.

Woah, this was short and small, but I loved it! I kind of felt like I was actually there watching this happen, and I loved Aragorn's words. They seemed so 'him'. You missed a few things, like 'were etched worry' should be ' were etched with worry', and 'shuttered' should be 'shuddered', but other than that this was great! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!