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  derek chapter 1 . 10/11 tifa to cloud my heart beats for your ears my breasts are yours and yours alone and my pussy wants a chocobo headed idiot penis in it |
 crystalblue19 chapter 1 . 3/7/2016 Ah, I loved that, it was so adorable! x) |
| nineties chapter 1 . 2/14/2015 Oh, Cloud. How I wish for them to be canon. Oh, how, how, how, how, how, ho- *dies of feels* |
| S chapter 1 . 4/15/2014 Very. Very nice. I wish Cloud would really appreciate her like this! He reminded me of my husband :3 |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2013 All these warm tummy feelings c: |
| Ghibli Ninja chapter 1 . 11/2/2013 That last line was just perfect. It's completely true too. Tifa is beautiful, inside and out. How could anyone not love her? I can only hope to be as lovely as her when I grow up. This story was sensual, romantic, lovely and everything a Cloti fic should be. 5/5 stars :3 |
| lapaxlove chapter 1 . 6/9/2013 I like it, I haven't read much cloti fics, and despite what ppl think I like this couple, one of many fav ff7 couple. And I like your writing description & style. |
| xSummonerYunax chapter 1 . 6/4/2013 That was extremely beautiful...there is no better way to express Tifa's body through a lover's pov than how you did it. Amazing read! |
| MakoRain chapter 1 . 2/25/2013 I really like it. It captured the moment very well and it never hurts to be a little sensual ;) Thanks for the good read :) MakoRain *meant to be* |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2013 I likey very much! I just wish Cloud had helped her clean up after the bar was closed, I think Tifa would have appreciated that. |
| Hyuuga Reborn chapter 1 . 7/14/2012 Yet another love good story. |
| drinktea chapter 1 . 9/2/2011 I think what I most enjoyed about this was that you let us see Tifa through Cloud's eyes- I really don't see too much of this in fanfictionland. And of course, I also liked that Cloud loved what he saw in her. This was a very sweet piece. |
| JC-zala chapter 1 . 8/15/2011 Impressive. The story left a sweet flavor in my mouth. It was pleasing and sensual. You've portrayed Tifa quite well, quite different from what I've imagined, and I like it. Great job. |
| Strifegirl chapter 1 . 12/16/2010 I totally agree *O* this was smexy! *O* very very good lemon x3 thanks for writing this xD please make more x3 |
| BananaPeaceMonkeyKarmi chapter 1 . 11/24/2010 I really, REALLY like this story! I appreciate how you kept the title consistantly throughout the story, mainly talking about Tifa's body, but in different ways than most people would think. I also really love the very last sentence that sums everything up and actually says why he's in love with her, and not just what he's in love with. This was very well done! And its was just so affectionate and cute and wonderful! Looooved it! |