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That was slightly disturbing, but the ending was absolutely PERFECT!

this was an amazing story, keep writing :)

Aww, that was so sweet! :D I love how this managed to be dark and romantic at once, how Inuyasha was in this story: protective, sweet, etc. (Literally; I am, like, IN LOVE with this Inuyasha now. XD) I think the state of Kagome and Naraku's relationship was interesting, too, how the guy was pretty much insane and sadistic and the pieces began falling together overtime. Digging up Kikyou was...disturbing. Very disturbing. Yet, at the same time, I felt you wrote the horror and shock of such a moment very well. All in all, I loved the InuKag and drama in this one-shot, and have to say, it's my favorite one-shot of yours yet. *tears up* AWESOME job! .

Good job. It's good, though I'd really love it if you could have emphasized the love between Inuyasha and Kagome/ dedicated more lines to how Inuyasha was attracted to Kagome. In a way, it feels to me as though Inuyasha still loved Kikyo over Kagome... Like he was also needing to fill a hole in his heart... But your writing style is really nice, very descriptive. *claps* Good work!

sweet :)

Beautiful! I loved it :)

good sotry. wow first really good single chapter story. glad it was so long.

if u ever need another story to write you coudl alwyas be inspired to write the rest of this story.

Wow ~ that was really well done. I'm sorry ~ I can't seem to find the right words right now to do the story justice or to qualify as an actual critique. Good character development, good and well measured description ~ not too wordy, but descriptive enough to tell the story and paint the backdrop. And a fairly happy ending. Thank you for sharing!

It was an awesome one-shot, I really liked it. :)

My jaw fell open at the part of Naraku holding Kikyo's corpse. What a sicko. I would have never been able to stand being with him like Kagome did. Aside from the obvious angst, this oneshot was still sweet. Thanks for sharing. (:

Aw that was sweet! In the end anyway! :)