This was REALLY REALLY great!

I liked this chapter!

Good job, and keep writing!

Damn u Simon. Again.

Amazing.

When the hell did she lick him and how the hell did I miss it?

It wont let me sign in. :(

I love this chapter! It's perfect.

So cute! I love Derek and Chloe was very brave for doing something like that. I mean, I would never do it, that's for sure. I loved the chapter, and I love the story.

Last chapter? Really? I just hope it ends with a happy ending. All awesome amazing love stories end with a happy ending.

thats funny the last one where she says a part of me has to pee lmfao

Awwwww *smiles* I love you derbs, you rock! Okay anyways, yeah you are so stealing lines from the Reckoning! You cheater -.- Though I don't care, because they fit really well ;3

OMG! I really can't believe how good this story is. At first I didn't want to read this cuz I usually like the stories that start right after the third book or when people change the way the book went, but when I read this story, it was AMAZING! I absolutely loved how you involved the story line of the books to this story and how the characters are well matched to their attitudes from the book. I have read some of your other stories and this one, by far, is the best! Please update as much as possible! :)

sPEED! is thee keey! :) CAN't wait TILL MONDAY! AH, derek...

~Aly

WOOHOO! I love elevator momeenttss! They bring people together

3 xDD

OF COURSE Derek wouldnt give in that easy. lol

Yummmy(; update really really soon prettyyyyyyy pleaseeeeee!

I love this and have been waiting forever. And ever. And ever.

It the least we deserve

oh, classic "trapped in the elevator" scenario, how I love thee!

Update sooooon!

:D

LOVE! Oh my God I love Tori and Simon!