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Leni
11/2/11 . chapter 1
Aw. This was adorable! I loved how supportive Eugene is through the whole thing, and having Gothel's words come back to Rapunzel when she's feeling blue was a realistic touch.

I was surprised about the princesses sneaking around to meet Rapunzel, but I found their little meeting too cute. Especially when they started gushing about Eugene.

Good job!
Pinnatus
10/29/11 . chapter 1
Wow! Well written, entertaining and had some cute Rapunzel/Eugene moments. Very nice and goes to my favs!
Love and Rock Music
10/27/11 . chapter 1
Cuteness to the tenth power! LOVED IT.
Roz
9/30/11 . chapter 1
Love the story!

I can so imagine that happening!

Thanks for writing it and keep up the good work ^^
kittehkitty2
8/25/11 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, this was AMAZING! I loved how all the princesses ended up being perfectly normal people, with personalities... And, when Eugene was talking about the trade meeting, I was laughing so hard I couldn't breathe!

The fly falling asleep... the prince knitting with his fingers... the portrait yawning, AAAAAGH! xDDDD

Again, so awesome... You definitely have that hard to find talent that everyone dreams of having! Just hilarious...
FutureGingerQueen
8/17/11 . chapter 1
Aww! Words can't even describe how much I love this!
TharzZzDunN
8/6/11 . chapter 1
I thought you did a very good job of bringing the characters to life , nicely done!

Any chance of you dangling any more like this?
Zurai
8/3/11 . chapter 1
This story made me squeal.
Rycr
7/12/11 . chapter 1
Great job! I was grinning like a fool all during the Princesses' slumber party because it was so adorable. Which is why I shouldn't have read this at work. My coworkers gave me weird glances every time they walked by.

Anyway, you got the characterization perfectly right, and the other Princesses you created were certainly interesting and well-rounded characters, as far as I could tell from the little snippet we see of their true selves. The bits of romance between Rapunzel and Eugene and the gossip amongst the Princesses were done very well.
Hedlund
7/5/11 . chapter 1
The princesses are adorable. I'm glad they turned out to be so nice!
Angel Starbeam
6/25/11 . chapter 1
I love the princesses and how they decided to have a slumber party with Rapunzel, and the knitting Prince was awesome.
Phoenix Fanatic
6/21/11 . chapter 1
This is absolutely fantastic! Perfect in every way. (Grammatically incorrect sentence, but hey, it's all cool!)
the grey mage
6/2/11 . chapter 1
not enough pascal
RomanianPrincess
5/31/11 . chapter 1
I guess I never really thought how it could be hard to adjust to palace life. But I like it :)
indracon
5/30/11 . chapter 1
D'aaaawwww! This was so sweet! Loved how the princesses were so bro with each other. It made me squeal! C:

Great job!
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