OMG! I love this fic. I can't wait for another chapter.
XOXO

I love this story! You are so great! Please if you can update.

Next chapter?

I dunno why I've spent the last 2 days rereading this when there's been no sign of an update for so long! But boy I do love this story, it's nice to see an Olderward who isn't acting overtly domineering. I wait longingly for more!

does anyone feel romantic vibes between siobhan & emmett? is it just me? i REALLY ship it, even if it is my imagination.

oh wow this is very witty banter great job!

oh my god this is so unique! Love your story already she seems so real, exactly how I would feel

Beautiful story! I couldn't stop reading.

What a fabulous chapter. I just love these two. Hope all is well in your world. :)

I have loved this story for years and I am very happy that you are still working on it

Oh, please, please, please publish more of this wonderful story!

"I could feel it in his taught muscles..." NO. It's TAUT, as in "tight," not "taught," as in "instructed.

"creams and blacks and metallic's" Why would you use an apostrophe? The "metallics" don't own anything. Apostrophes are used only in contractions and to show possession.

"a pair of drooling ogler's." The oglers don't possess anything. Omit the apostrophe.
"waving their arms madly and beaconing to me" Do you mean BECKONING?

"Let her passed." No. Use PAST. PASSED is a verb.