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only 2 sentences and i alreday love your dumbledore

The whole story is really heart-warming, thank you!

That was so touching.
I can’t say enough times how much this bothers me: “was certainly more informative than Sirius' claim that Lily just finally, after seven years of stalking, said yes so that James would maybe leave her alone and he hadn't.”
It’s not your fault, it’s canon, but it’s just such a toxic thing.

Haha, what a dopey Dumbledore

The banter between Snape and Dumbledore is Gold!
Wow.
Also, Snape’s insistence that this will not turn into an inspirational story is really really funny.

Yas. Dumbledore is like mycroft holmes in the sence that both tinke stalking of ossesibly traking somewhone is a way to keep them safe.

Nice au.

This definitely was a humorous take on the HP stories. I loved the way you twisted the obvious plot holes and inconsistencies from the original books and made them work for this story. Nice job! Thanks for posting.

That was pretty good, great job

This was a really fun read! I know it's part of the parody, but I really liked how Harry was so rational and logical about things that would have sent him off in a temper in cannon. Lol, the traditional rival might as well be real. Thanks for writing it!

I loved this story! Thanks for sharing it with us.

I thought Harry and the others knew that Tom Riddle is Voldemort's real name? I'm almost sure Harry knows at least.

It's the same when they went after Quirrell, the chapter before that Ron says that Voldemort's dead and then in the next chapter, he's surprised and shocked to learn that Voldemort isn't dead.

Ah, the Clowns appear.

Wow! I like your originality!
Good work!