I get the premise of the story, but they way you present it makes it sound like McGee is an abused child, who needs coddling. Abused I'll grant you, but a child, Tim is not.

I think the timeline for this story is a little skewed, in the show, Gibbs never told anybody about his wife and daughter, not even Ducky knew them. Because, Gibbs hadn't even joined NIS which later became NCIS, until after Kelly's death.

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Loved it! And Yeah, I agree, they didn't treat Tim like a colleague , more like a whipping boy.

I watch NCIS nesde the first season and Dog Tags is the worst episode I've ever seen. Abby and Tony were two horrible brats in this episode. Tony's fans like to cry about Dead Air, right? Well the McGee fans hate Dog Tags. I started to not support the Abby character after this episode and Tony behaved like an idiot authentic. Please, where is the merit of a senior agent humiliate your probie as Tony did ?! How can this be a form of training? Ridiculous.

Really like this series.

Hi this is better the then the first story.

Okay, I love that he is drinking Jack Daniels. Because of Jack and Daniel. 'Nuff said.
And Probie-wan Kenobi is pure gold. It's absolutely perfect. Thank you for that.
You know, it's a good thing SG1 didn't fly in. I had an image of Teal'c at airport security and them asking him to take his hat off and him giving him the stare, and then I wondered if his forehead tatoo thingie would set off the metal detectors.

Okay, I knew you had all threads in hand, just got anxious, you know? Great job, gonna read #3 now, any others or related stories?

happy Dance to ch14...he did say the right things, and did the right Thing...i hope he stays to it...and that Gibbs really learns to open his eyes, and brings Jenny sheperd nd as hard as it sounds maybe even Abby in front of a higher up to get them under control and in case of Jenny away from any Job that has autority over People! she i dangerous ...

ahhh yes, what a good Boy Tim is, he did great with the Transfer, stupid Abby she really Needs a Dressing down, and to be put in place again, she is only a forensic lab rat nothing more...and not the Boss of ncis...bitch...she Needs to get a Boss and other coworker in the lab again, i mean they only get more thane one case trough when she is away and the full Team is there in he forencic after her shift...
and gibbs really Needs some more bitch slapps and some more eye opener...so that they atleast Show Tim that they care for him and help him get started in his new Job...atleast i hope he gets away from Jenny shepperd the other selfish bitch of ncis after abby...
he deserves happiness and his family

love this Story...ist so interesting, you cant wait to read next chapters and it bring the blood to flow from Anger and the wish to bitch slap some mean bitches

atleast Tony and ziva seem to care!

All those who rag on NCIS are obviously completely ignoring all the char development since then.

If you have to character bash to make your story work... you are a bad writer.

Yeah, I know you're aiming for the lowest common denominator and aren't interested in the actual characters in either series (your Tim is an insult to the actor, as is the travesty that you did of O'Neill)... but still. This is just plain immature whining.

I enjoyed this very much

I love this story line. Many times Tim has not been treated right, esp by Abby. For that reason I won't watch the dog episode. Tim is a great character. Thank you for setting things right.