Beautiful.

I love your story, full of mythology. And the centaur fully embracing all of Edward's traits. I love it. Please write more. You are a breath of fresh air to me.

Your research and hard work is evident, and make the story even more beautiful

Awesome start!

What a sweet story!

Beautiful story. I'm relieved no harm to the centaur was done in this story.

With a centaur, you naughty girl! At which is it considered zoophilia? LOL. I love mythology too and think there is not enough stories with centaurs. Thanks.

Blue

This is the first story I've read which intertwines mythology and Twilight. It's very interesting and shows imagination and knowledge/research. I look forward to continuing this story. Thank you for taking time out of your personal life to appease us as 99% of us are very appreciative!

Ya know...I just can't believe how rude and ignorant some people are, especially to this group of imaginative, intelligent and selfless authors. And those being rude seem to be lacking in their English skills, sort of sounding uneducated. I doubt very seriously they would read a book then write to the author telling them how bad the book is. Yeah, right. All the tacky people just need to close the window and begin another story. And are they really able to throw stones?

i liked it! so unusual and refreshing!
the names you gave the caracters are beautiful
i love your work!

Very beautiful. Thank you for sharing your writing.

I'm so happy, they finally were together.

It's so hard to think of Edward as a Centaur. But their love is beautiful.

I can't wait to see what's next!

is this story going to include bestiality?

This was such a breath of fresh air. Thank you so much for sharing it :)