this was a cute little story

I really liked this :) I would have never thought of Derek first noticing Chloe's streaked hair. Very interesting and unique.

I like! :D

i can't wait for the next one

Ahh, cute! I loved this!

Awe how cute :D

Gah! Girl going to capture my heart. A color scheme? What a fantastic idea! And just the right amount of fluff and banter that epitomizes Chlerek so originally. There wasn't much room for error, and even if there were any, they were minor and lost by that line, 'You're stupid,' which made me combust into hysterical, fangirl giggles. I'm eager to read through the next color. Blue? Purple? Perrywinkle? No? Are you sure? Okay... Update soon please. Alasyn- of CA

That is so freaking cute! i love it

*Sigh*

This was adorable. Sweet, simple and memorable. Update soon :)

Aww, that was DEFINATELY a chlerek momment. Derek and Chloe don't really seem the mushy-mushy kind of couple, but those that, underneath hidden words and between lines, they understand each other and realize their having a small "moment".

Lol, "you're stupid"

I like how Derek' inital thought/ analagy was comparing her streaks, to her blushing at Simon. But then it's DEREK that gets to snuggle with her and kiss her forehead, niceee.

I think this color theme is really smart and new and original.

Can't wait for the next update, hurry!