tifa to my drunken idiot I don t mind sharing a bed with you I wanted to share a bad with you before you left our hometown when you came back to our hometown wearing your soldier grunt uniform and when we was saving the world from your nutjob boss

This fanfiction is just too cute not to leave a review! I'm loving your style of writing and i found the metaphor of the lines and borders incredible. TIfa and Cloud characterization is also great. It makes it seem like an official fiction. I'm putting you on my favorites list -

LOVE IT.

Awwe! Cloud is so cute! He blushes! SO CUTE. Reading your fanfictions make me want to watch Advent Children again! (Giggles to self) I watched it yesterday, and last week...

I'll try to be original with this review, but no promises. As many have said, the 'lines' imagery is stunning. I can tell you're a truly dedicated and talented writer, with the subtly and precision you use in this one-shot. Though fluff has it's place, it can get droll sometime and such serious, substantial writing here is a rare example on FFnet of truly authentic writing.

The great part about this piece is how it feels like such a natural continuation of the movie and the characters. You write the characters exquisitely and I enjoy a POV that isn't from Cloud for a change. This piece also feels like a genuine peek into the growth of the characters, how they think and feel, how they change and react.

I adore the ending. I know of a fact that I'm going to look back at this many, many times and try to replicate what you have so effortlessly captured here. Thank you!

This fic frustrates me. Why? Because its so painstakingly true to the characters, and trust me, Cloud and Tifa are two people I absolutely love, and would yell at if I knew them for real. Their struggles with each other came out pretty much perfectly here and nothing seemed out of character. Other than the fact that Tifa finally SAID SOMETHING about their hellishly slow relationship. However, it sounds like a natural progression, and always pictured that it would be Tifa to make the first, yet incredibly subtle move.

I love the way you write them, and the way you write in general. I LOVE fics that stick very, VERY close to how the characters truly are, and you have the raw ability to portray them faithfully true to life. Please continue writing, because its obvious that you care about these characters enough to do them real justice.

Sorry for long review. In short, I love it all. I love you for putting this out. :)

Wow. Amazing. The personification of the "lines" added a whole new level to the story. Really really good :)

Beautifully written!

Superb fic! Loved every bit of it!

So, you've got to figure that girls mature a bit faster than boys, no? And Cloud had 4 or 5 years of social development stalled while he was in a test tube, right? Then when he came out, he has the mashup of his and Zack's minds and Sepiroth messing with him, right? So, he's not going to be the most together guy for starting up a healthy relationship, but he does try. I think that comes across well in this.

That was so sweet and I loved how you wrote the ending. Your whole writing style was nice to read and you didn't have to blatantly tell us what was going on, you did it in subtlety. That method made the read very enjoyable. :)

awwwwwwww! x3 that was sooo sweet! I loved it!

Wow, really sweet. It was kinda over the top at some parts, but I really loved the end. Where Cloud was kind of innocent and not willing to talk. And especially the last paragraph. Loved it! Over all, good job :)

This is a WONDERFUL piece of work... GOOD JOB!

Oh wow this DOES make sense! I've always wondered how come Marlene's room has enough room for 2 beds when Denzel's presence wasn't planned when it was built. Hehe, nice one :D

OH. MY. GOSH.

OMG.

This. Was. Amazing.

Honestly one of the best stories I've read in a long long time. I'm basically in shock and awe of how you oh so perfectly wrote Cloud Strife. In fact, I've ever seen him written more perfectly than in this. Tifa was great too: I could sense the strong woman she is, but also the hesitant and insecure Tifa that was in FFVII. Yeah, you really are amazing at writing these characters.

I adore how it wasn't overly fluffy and romantic. It's not Cloud and Tifa at all, at least not for a long time for them. So many writers rush into the romance too fast. It's going to be a long hard road for these two, and the transitions in your story were really realistic and believable.

I'm also not one for first person stories. The vast majority of writers out there CANNOT write in first person. It always comes off as childish and immature, and the word "I" is used far too many times. However, you really did a good job writing in first person!

Overall, really really really loved this. I...I think you succeeded in making me ship them.

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