I am surprised shouldn't Shirou be a old man because the time that Shirou lived was in the early 2000 years this is about 40 years into the future.

Fuck you, for make him CG.

This is incredibly boring. Did it ever occur to you that fancy space acrobatics aren't remotely as interesting to read about as they are to watch? Because the result was an entire chapter in which nothing happened that I gave a crap about.

Stop calling it "odo," for God's sake. It's called "od." It's not a Japanese word. Stop trying to out-Japan them.

Damn, what a great story. I don't know anything about macross and I'm invested. Doubtful it'll be continued at all though, but I'm definite following for the hopes of spontaneous necromancy.

Fuck... FuckFuckFuckFuckFuck! ...I think i'm in love. Not even a quarter of the way through this first chapter and i was already hooked! This sum'bitch reads like a military-scifi the likes of John Ringo or David Weber. With the added benefit of staring one of my all time favorite anime protagonist! AND I HAVE 13 MORE CHAPTERS TO LOOK FORWARD TO! ...damn. I just hope this isn't a dead fic. Either way, thank you very much for sharing. Seriously.

I honest,y expect pixie squadron to somehow trick, blackmail or otherwise through alternative methods, get shirou to use the macronisation chamber to grow to zentradi size, I can see it happening easily. Who knows maybe then can get him to pioneer a quedlunn rhea for a time.

Awesome story, when's the next chapter going up, I hope to see more soon. I like how close pixie are with shirou, honestly I expect he'll end up with ramaria or nene at some point.

Good story, just wish you had finished it.

Great story! Too bad Gabriel Blessing is dead or something. Overall superb suspense and char development.

Your writing got a lot better throughout the story. If you ever start this up again, I hope you also go through the first two to three chapters and edit them as well.

I like your writing for the most part, but I just can't get over your distinct lack of proper dialogue formatting. It's grating and highly unsightly.

WTF is odo! I know you don't know your nanuverse details, but atleast use the correct terms. Imagine reading naruto, and they start calling their chakra chi, it's so annoying reading that word over and over.
By the way you mean od.

Heya. I recently relocated this story and was reminded of how much I liked this little odd ball. I am not too clear n the Macross Frontier Franchise but I have come to appreciate the characters as you describe them. I was just curious if you ever intended to finish it, if so good luck on keeping your bunnies in line.

I really enjoyed this story and I hope it will someday be updated. I for one will be waiting :)