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yaoifanfake 4/17/12 . chapter 9
OMG love love love this :D can't wait for more...OH MY GOD i hope Roy and Ollie end up together :)
Little Karma 4/6/12 . chapter 9
nice chapter i can't wiat for more
Flower-Child14 4/5/12 . chapter 9
Omg! I thought this story was dead! I shall never have doubts again! forgive my insolence! lol seriously I am so glad to see this story still going. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! update soon.
nequam-tenshi 4/4/12 . chapter 9
A part of me just wants the Young Justice team there to stalk Lex and find out his biggest secrets. Then it will be payback for what he did to Roy. But I am sure that whatever you have plan will be better then what I wrote.
MyLittleAngelxxx 4/4/12 . chapter 9
I so wanted Ollie to be closer to Lex so that he could hit him! What a creep! I hate him. Poor Roy, he just starts going out of the house and then that happens! When will Roy find out that he's pregnant, by the way? What will he and Ollie do when he does? I really want to know! I loved this chapter!

Can't wait for the next update!

Kind Regards,

MyLittleAngelxxx
JadeDragon220 4/3/12 . chapter 9
I say Ollie should just go ahead and shove a missile up Lex's ass. He deserves it.

And...on an unrelated note, what are you going to name the baby? Roy's kid from the comics was a little girl named Lian. Oliver had two kids, a boy and a girl, named Conner and Olivia. In some versions, Lex had a daughter named Lena and a son named Lex Jr. He also has a niece named Nasthalia Luthor. Lex's relatives are not cannon, and Im not 100% Olivia is either, but I thought it was kinda interesting. :D
Miyuki Tanaka 4/3/12 . chapter 9
wo...this story is addicting!
nequam-tenshi 2/25/12 . chapter 8
How does the League take to this new development Roy will come to know? Or does Roy not plan to tell anyone?
MyLittleAngelxxx 2/7/12 . chapter 8
Thank you for updating, finally! I was in college -yawns- and I thought that I'd check my emails and saw that you had updated and that brightened my day considerably and I was able to get through college because of it. So thank you!

The first part of the chapter was all Awww! They're soo cute! And then shock and horror I find out that Lex Luthor hired the Joker! But looking back on previous chapters, I did think that he was a bit pushy when he found the result of the Joker's meddling. And also: Roy's pregnant! Yay! Just wish that the father was a better person. Please make sure Ollie keeps him and his baby safe! Also, does Roy know that he's pregnant yet? Or will that be in the next chapter? I just can't get over how cute Ollie and Roy were in this chapter.

Update soon! (Or sooner than last time)

MyLittleAngelxxx

(previously Sam-Uley's-little-sister)
a living hell 2/2/12 . chapter 7
I really hope you continue this story... It's really good and I'd love to know what happens next
RH4P5ODY 11/15/11 . chapter 7
finally an update. i really like reading this story and it's really the only YJ fanfic i read :D

UPDATE SOON! I know you just updated but i really want to know what happens next ^^
MyLittleAngelxxx 11/15/11 . chapter 7
Glad you finally updated. I love this story and I love the emotion that is being shown in this story. You are handling this issue with the utmost care and sensitivity and that should be recognised. I love the whole story.

Sam-Uley's-little-sister
Keep Moving Onwards 11/14/11 . chapter 7
Great chapter, I really like how you inserted their emotions in. Sometimes it was a little unclear what the location was so I recommend working on that. Please update soon!
ThisShouldBeBlowingYourMind 9/2/11 . chapter 6
I NEED MOAR MOAR MOAR MOARRRRR! :D
No Account 8/16/11 . chapter 6
I dont know why people want Roy with Lex. I love GA, and Lex is a villian! But I would love him to stay with Lex, then it will turn out that Lex was using him for some evil plan to attack the Leauge! Then a heartbroken Roy will crawl back to Ollie, confessing his love for him and telling him everything about Lex and his plan. Ollie feels upset that Roy picked Lex over him and defeats Lex, getting over that sad 'you liked someone better than me' feeling Roy gave him and they make sweet, sweet love that night. That would be so good.
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