 yaoifanfake 4/17/12 . chapter 9OMG love love love this :D can't wait for more...OH MY GOD i hope Roy and Ollie end up together :) |
 Little Karma 4/6/12 . chapter 9nice chapter i can't wiat for more |
 Flower-Child14 4/5/12 . chapter 9Omg! I thought this story was dead! I shall never have doubts again! forgive my insolence! lol seriously I am so glad to see this story still going. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! update soon. |
 nequam-tenshi 4/4/12 . chapter 9A part of me just wants the Young Justice team there to stalk Lex and find out his biggest secrets. Then it will be payback for what he did to Roy. But I am sure that whatever you have plan will be better then what I wrote. |
 MyLittleAngelxxx 4/4/12 . chapter 9I so wanted Ollie to be closer to Lex so that he could hit him! What a creep! I hate him. Poor Roy, he just starts going out of the house and then that happens! When will Roy find out that he's pregnant, by the way? What will he and Ollie do when he does? I really want to know! I loved this chapter!
Can't wait for the next update!
Kind Regards,
MyLittleAngelxxx |
 JadeDragon220 4/3/12 . chapter 9I say Ollie should just go ahead and shove a missile up Lex's ass. He deserves it.
And...on an unrelated note, what are you going to name the baby? Roy's kid from the comics was a little girl named Lian. Oliver had two kids, a boy and a girl, named Conner and Olivia. In some versions, Lex had a daughter named Lena and a son named Lex Jr. He also has a niece named Nasthalia Luthor. Lex's relatives are not cannon, and Im not 100% Olivia is either, but I thought it was kinda interesting. :D |
 Miyuki Tanaka 4/3/12 . chapter 9wo...this story is addicting! |
 nequam-tenshi 2/25/12 . chapter 8How does the League take to this new development Roy will come to know? Or does Roy not plan to tell anyone? |
 MyLittleAngelxxx 2/7/12 . chapter 8Thank you for updating, finally! I was in college -yawns- and I thought that I'd check my emails and saw that you had updated and that brightened my day considerably and I was able to get through college because of it. So thank you!
The first part of the chapter was all Awww! They're soo cute! And then shock and horror I find out that Lex Luthor hired the Joker! But looking back on previous chapters, I did think that he was a bit pushy when he found the result of the Joker's meddling. And also: Roy's pregnant! Yay! Just wish that the father was a better person. Please make sure Ollie keeps him and his baby safe! Also, does Roy know that he's pregnant yet? Or will that be in the next chapter? I just can't get over how cute Ollie and Roy were in this chapter.
Update soon! (Or sooner than last time)
MyLittleAngelxxx
(previously Sam-Uley's-little-sister) |
 a living hell 2/2/12 . chapter 7I really hope you continue this story... It's really good and I'd love to know what happens next |
 RH4P5ODY 11/15/11 . chapter 7finally an update. i really like reading this story and it's really the only YJ fanfic i read :D
UPDATE SOON! I know you just updated but i really want to know what happens next ^^ |
 MyLittleAngelxxx 11/15/11 . chapter 7Glad you finally updated. I love this story and I love the emotion that is being shown in this story. You are handling this issue with the utmost care and sensitivity and that should be recognised. I love the whole story.
Sam-Uley's-little-sister |
 Keep Moving Onwards 11/14/11 . chapter 7Great chapter, I really like how you inserted their emotions in. Sometimes it was a little unclear what the location was so I recommend working on that. Please update soon! |
 ThisShouldBeBlowingYourMind 9/2/11 . chapter 6I NEED MOAR MOAR MOAR MOARRRRR! :D |
 No Account 8/16/11 . chapter 6 I dont know why people want Roy with Lex. I love GA, and Lex is a villian! But I would love him to stay with Lex, then it will turn out that Lex was using him for some evil plan to attack the Leauge! Then a heartbroken Roy will crawl back to Ollie, confessing his love for him and telling him everything about Lex and his plan. Ollie feels upset that Roy picked Lex over him and defeats Lex, getting over that sad 'you liked someone better than me' feeling Roy gave him and they make sweet, sweet love that night. That would be so good. |