| Reviews for Dangerous |
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Master of Chronicles chapter 1 . 4/3/2012 Ah, just the thing I needed. A perfect Cloti from the Dissidia games. Not too many have written such a well balanced story. The last one I started but didn't finish was all about their physical attraction to each other. But their relationship goes far deeper than that. Thanks for being true to the tale while adding your own spin on things. Makes reading fictions worthwhile. Truth be told I almost expected Sephiroth to wander in at any moment and kill both of them. (I imagined this to a an earlier cycle than twelve for some reason). Great work, and thanks for sharing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2011 I'm a huge fan of your work, and I loved this. Thank you : ) |
soleildanse chapter 1 . 6/13/2011 Short but sweet! I gotta say I just love how you write Cloud and Tifa together. I've read some of your other CloTi fics and you just got a knack for it. Amazing writer. Faved* |
JC-zala chapter 1 . 6/5/2011 Beautiful oneshot! Written perfectly well. I must say that their interaction came out very naturally, very in-character. You have a good understanding of both characters. I like how you portrayed their emotions, their feelings towards each other, and their dialogues are just right for the mood. Tifa and Cloud are my favorite FF couple, and you certainly did them justice with this story. Good job. |
Darkeyes92 chapter 1 . 4/19/2011 Really a very touching story. I haven't yet played the game, but the storyline has been spoiled for me so i though what the hell, why not. Any how, i was really pleased with the way that you maintained the shy, intimacy between Cloud and Tifa. I like how you should the unnaturalness/strangeness of the way they keep colliding, and being near each other. Your writing is always a pleasure to read not only becuase of the qulality of the writing, but also because of the creativity, and the imagination behind your work. Every single thing you write makes me want to read more. Speaking of which, are you planning to add more to this? I would love to see more. The only reason I ask is because it ties together fairly well toward the end and i think it could be a very strong stand alone fic, but that is your descision (BTW if you do decide to write more, i will lap it up like a dog on... something disgusting but dogs seem to love... like trash (Stray reference!)) Anyhoo, I should probably do some kind of work... Game theory is calling... and i should really not ignore it... Much Love FLF xoxo |
Irish-Brigid chapter 1 . 4/14/2011 Wow. So Cloud is on Choas's side this time around? Well, this does happen before the original Dissidia, so I guess it's possible. No matter the sides, Tifa and Cloud find each other. _ I like this. |
drinktea chapter 1 . 4/6/2011 It's been awhile since I've read CloTi, and I've NEVER read any Dissidia CloTi, so I think I've lucked out by finding this one first. It was just beautiful. Thank you for writing this! |
Strifegirl chapter 1 . 4/2/2011 this was lovely! TwT I've been looking forward to read fics from Dissidia Duodecim x3 thanks for sharing this one ;3 it was brilliant x3 |
J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 3/31/2011 Crazy world, crazy fight, but one sweet moment and another promise Cloud will find hard to keep. |
SecondChances chapter 1 . 3/26/2011 This was .. wow. Your writing skills are amazing. I hope you continue as I am an avid Cloud/Tifa fan. :) |
Fenikkusuken chapter 1 . 3/22/2011 *wild applause* Oh, well done! I REALLY like this, because it exposes Cloud's vulnerabilities in a raw, visceral way. I also love the pacing and atmosphere. |
beautifullove chapter 1 . 3/22/2011 aweh this was amazing and I love your writing skills when it comes to cloud and tifa 3 please keep on writing. |
Xecko chapter 1 . 3/22/2011 Completely made my day. :) I feel so fluffy inside. HAHA Tifa, you go girl. I hope you update more stories soon :D I REALLY ENJOY READING THEM BECAUSE THEY'RE AWESOMESAUCE xDD |
LongGoodbyes chapter 1 . 3/22/2011 Wow this made me smile :) i love how you portrayed both Cloud & Tifa in this one. |
paperpieces chapter 1 . 3/22/2011 oh my i absolutely love your Cloti stories and this one just made my day. :) please continue writing. |