| Reviews for Harry Potter and The Veela |
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   Dezzi95 chapter 16 . 10/25 It seems like Harry might have an insane stalker |
| bellapom chapter 25 . 10/20 This is a great story I would so love to see more |
| Mark Sinfield chapter 25 . 10/11 good storyline please continue |
| Vampireking40 chapter 7 . 10/4 So Harry can understand Parsletouge and the headmaster is trying to force Harry to do thing his way. Well he learned don't mess with Harry. |
| Vampireking40 chapter 4 . 10/4 So it took the boy becoming a bigger Quidditch star then he was to realize he has treated his oldest and heir terribly and plans to make it up to the boy. That is great you don't see that in a lot of these stories where Harry is either older then his brother or the twin of the brother who is declared the Boy who lived by Dumbledore. |
| No offense chapter 1 . 9/26 Straight trash. I like flawless characters; they inspire me. But your story severely lacks details and originality. Not to mention there’s virtually no conflict, intervention or obstacles. No original plot either. Harry doesn’t even have any cute personal quirks either. 4/10. |
| Erikbrohen chapter 25 . 9/25 Hey, this is the second time I've read through this story, and I love it as much as ever. You make the characters feel so real, it's as if this is a real part of canon. The story is wonderful, and I hope you figure out whatever you're going through in your life and gets back to writing. Best of luck, Erik. |
| ColdCraver chapter 1 . 9/19 An altogether good story, I would have liked to see Harry start his Hogwarts journey though. Atleast mentions of it before being plunged into third year. Maybe a mere mention of how he 'excelled in classes like...' I don't know. Good story though. |
| Guest chapter 25 . 9/10 Enjoyable story Keep writing as life allows |
| Ahmed Maged chapter 1 . 9/4 little rosy ? are you for real ? so this is the evil MC ?does any one know what evil is? |
| Su.Lecue chapter 25 . 8/24 I knew thay was flamel and Ariana Dumbledore! how come she's alive? whats her story? I do hope you update soon. the story is good |
| Lextribe chapter 25 . 8/23 Please continue this story |
| spitfyre1 chapter 6 . 8/19 Not to be a dick but why does rose never age? She was four when Eric first started so she should be five in chamber of secrets time. But she seems to never age. |
| pyoson123 chapter 1 . 8/9 I just wanted to write when I saw Harry being guilty but he better not forgive them until probably the end or never at all |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/9 I'm struggling to see how three Americans could get a spot on the British U-17 team..? |