Reviews for 10 Items Or Less: From The Start
Doris chapter 10 . 4/28/2017
Loved it. Thanks for sharing!
Nychell21 chapter 10 . 9/18/2014
I Luv this story!·
PhoenixDiamond not logged in chapter 10 . 8/10/2011
Sooooo yea I'm at work...reading this story for possibly the twenith time. Umm soo...yea I can't help it lol. I simply love this story. I even have a copy saved at home to read whenever I want lol. I just love this story so damn much. The humor, the addictive drama and development just makes this worth reading a million times. Alot of these fav parts will never get old lol.
Ephemeral Everlast chapter 10 . 7/16/2011
This was awesome! I'm so sorry for not replying quicker, for my excursion to the store lasted a bit longer than I thought. XD

The sex was described beautifully. That makes me sound like a damn pervert, but I'm alright with that. ;) I like the fact that these two finally made love with each other deep into the night, again and again and rode off into the sunset, claiming their happily ever after ending. This was such a joy to read, and I have no doubt my friend will love this tale.

Also, the ending was a very, very interesting treat to say the least. *nods* I pictured the security people in the store zooming in on the two lovers as they rode each other all the way to China. I imagine that quite a few of them would've had to excuse themselves for the day. XD

This was awesome, keep it up, and your humor is spot on. Thank you for this read. :)

~Luna
Ephemeral Everlast chapter 9 . 7/16/2011
I am so glad that Sesshomaru decided to dump Kagura. It made me so mad to see her blatantly disrespecting her in such a manner. Hell, I would've dumped her too! XD

Also, Inuyasha teaching Sesshomaru to surf is the cutest thing since I don't know when! *gushes* I just love, love this story! I like the plays with humor as well and the way it's narrated through Inuyasha's POV. Also, I like how there's an AU feel about it, one that is constructed to make people who love this couple happy and feel good about themselves afterwards, not crying and sobbing in a corner like a lot of stories in this fandom-including my own on them-will make them.

This cheered me up like you don't know what. Once I get back from going to the store, I will DEFINITELY keep reading. :)

P.S: writing this on the drive up to the city or wherever you went is awesome. I would've loved to see the faces on the people who looked at it. XD
Ephemeral Everlast chapter 8 . 7/16/2011
This was hilarious! Inuyasha's humor is spot on, yet again. I actually wrote down the little speech about how Inuyasha didn't think one should shove a broken glass bottle down Kagura's ass or anything, but that Sesshomaru needs and deserves to be with someone like him. Of which, I agree. :)

Also, Sesshomaru's sexual fantasy...that's just so damn hot. Also, to me, it makes a lot of sense, for in my mind, he is the most arrogant youkai to walk the face of the earth. I think he would enjoy showcasing his love life to others just to show them that he had Inuyasha or whomever, in some sort of bold declaration. That makes sense...also, it's just hot to think of them jack-hammering into next Christmas in the Interior Design aisle. :D

Terrific comedy, terrific story, you're golden. ;)
Ephemeral Everlast chapter 7 . 7/16/2011
Oh wow! A lot happened in this chapter, a chapter that I'll remember. :) Though I'm a huge fan of Kagura, I understand why it was necessary that you had to make her a villain in this amazing AU.

Also, as Inuyasha was sad, my heart bled for him. :( The poor thing just can't catch a break, can he? There was a great counterbalance of angst and romance in here, along with a humor that once again, nearly knocked me off my chair. I loved the line where Inuyasha said he could dance, and I also enjoyed how you said that Inuyasha didn't just compliment Sesshomaru to get in his pants, though it was nice in there.

In short, you're freaking hilarious, this is awesome, and I'm most certainly going to read all of this today, if not your Naraku/Sesshomaru stories. *drools*
Ephemeral Everlast chapter 6 . 7/16/2011
Oh no! How horrible! I hoped that Inuyasha would deal with the situation in a little bit more of a mature manner...but this is everyone's adorable curser prone for tantrums. XD I felt a small blow to my heart when they were fighting, for I love this pairing deeply and it made me sad that Inuyasha couldn't figure out what to do with his day.

Also, I happened to see that you still wove in some humor! I loved how Inuyasha called himself a fatty and didn't care in the least. I was also rolling on the floor with laughter after the Final Destination joke. XD Heads will roll indeed...*eagerly clicks on the next chapter*
Ephemeral Everlast chapter 5 . 7/15/2011
All of this was hilarious once again! Surfer Inuyasha is just so interesting to me! I see him perfectly in my mind in this black wet-suit, riding the waves. Also, I had this perfect image of him and Sesshomaru watching the sunset, leaning on one another in their original outfits for the anime.

In addition, I love how you put Kouga in here! He spices up the plot and makes for excellent banter and a type of friendly rivalry for Inuyasha to have. He'd make a good surfer also. :)

As to the ending...I knew it! I knew Sessh was just trying to cover something up! Lets hope that this new found epiphany turns out to be something especially grand for Inuyasha's receiving end. :)
Ephemeral Everlast chapter 4 . 7/15/2011
Again, I died laughing! Your methods of story-telling are a breath of fresh air! You remind me of a mixture of two authors I adore, one who wrote a hilarious story for my favorite video game called Blonde Ambition and another author called Tobiron who is notorious for having an amazing sense of humor and character development.

I loved how Inuyasha was fretting over what to wear, that's just so cute. :) I mean, with guys, one knows if they like the one they're going out with if they're worrying about the little details, and are genuinely nervous. I didn't expect Sesshomaru to be in gothic apparel, but the thought is too simmering to NOT think about. ;)

Burger King! I died laughing once again! Now, whenever I got to Burger King, I'll squint through the surface of the windows and hope to catch a glimpse of these two, erotically eating fries. XD

This is simply hilarious, a gem in Inucest/AU not quite Inucest fanfiction. :)
Ephemeral Everlast chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
I was laughing so hard at this, I cried. You really, really know how to tickle someones funny bone, you know that? :) I LOVE Inuyasha in here, he's such a riot! I like how he bought all that candy and is acting so out-there and wonderful...your version of him makes me smile and smile. :)

Also, the phone call was hilarious, I pictured all of that so well. If I could so much as draw within an inch of my life, I would create the image I saw in my head of that phone call. Maybe one day! :)

I also wonder if Inuyasha's constant flirting is making Sesshomaru more comfortable in his sexuality and in years of hiding who he may or may not have been. It makes me sad that people think that just because it's deemed wrong to be into your own gender. :( I hope that Inuyasha reveals this to him, that it's okay to love. _

This is such a riot, and I love it. Also, True Blood is awesome, you have excellent taste in shows my dear. I suggested this to my friend and I'm sure she'll love it just as much as I am!
Ephemeral Everlast chapter 2 . 7/15/2011
This is hot. Like, steamy sexy summery goodness hot. I hope that all of the fans of AU Inucest will flock to this eventually, for this is truly unique. I like the humor you use in Inuyasha's dialect as well as his little quirks that make him HIM. Also, your use of blending in nature and the beauty of the ocean really made me smile, for he would make such a good surfer. I've never heard of that before, and I love it. :)

Also, Sesshomaru in swim trunks is extremely sexy. *whistles* I love beach romances with plausibility and a humor twist. This reminds me of top-notch comedy one would find in a bookstore. :) Miroku as the stalker only adds to how hilarious all of this is.

*crosses fingers* The odds of Sesshomaru being straight and not in denial are slim. I can't wait to see what happens!
Ephemeral Everlast chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
This is hilarious! I needed a little cheering up, and I happened upon this treasure! I'm going to share it with a friend of mine who really likes this couple. 3

I love the way you've created an AU that's entirely hilarious and of your own devising. I like the way that you characterized Inuyasha as well as woven in all of the language and first person narrative. The only thing that's throwing me off a bit is your use of & for I like spelling out the word. However, if it's a favorite symbol for you, go right on ahead and use it!

It's awesome to know that there are a lot of people out there who write high-quality hilarious AU's for others who need a laugh, people like me. This is awesome, and I'll review every chapter, for it's what I like doing when something interests me. ;)
ladytokyo chapter 10 . 6/16/2011
So happy to read the end of this fic. Of course I'm sad that it had to end but what a ending. Thank you and I can't wait to read more from you in the future.
kougasl0ver chapter 10 . 6/14/2011
That was so utterly awesome! Excellent job, I love the yaoi and how you ended it with Inuyasha's side of their exhibitionist outings! Beautiful work, I loved it so much, and I can't wait to read the next story you move on to!
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