I really liked this story. It's so well written and I really did hate the bad guys. The only thing I had a little trouble believing is that the darts could enter into Inuyasha's skin so easily. Nice job.

Aaahhhh! Thank you so much for this!
This was a roller coaster of emotions! I absolutely adore this story! So much to feel! My shoulders hurt from the stress too lol
Wonderful! Amazing! Thank you!

One very minor detail: you wrote amber instead of brown when he is human

Ugh! I hate everyone in this story. Just leave them alone!

*SPOILER*
One thing I don't get is why Kagome called the police (I mean, yeah I get it but still). I think she should have called her mom. They think she's dead! She thought they bugged her phone (duh), you may as well have tried calling home to see if it was true and be able to let her family know rather than doing the obvious and calling the police. If it wasn't bugged or rerouted, her mom would have picked up. If it was bugged, they would have picked up and she would have known but at least it wasn't police. Idk... I am a little upset at Kagome for that. It was obvious they cover their tracks.

I had no idea this fanfic existed and Im so glad Im just scrolling through aimlessly on FF cause holy SHIT this is a HELLA AWESOME STORY
And absolutely gorgeous writing!
Like, damn, Id read a book written by you if they're this amazing
Infinity/10
Great plot, and great enemies, too! Yeah I really love this. s

This fic is more than well written, but it's EPIC! I finished reading it in two days. I could finish reading it in one day if only there were no real life interfering. I just want you to know that you're really a great writer, all suspense, action, drama, romance, in this fic that you made was superb. I almost cried when Kagome's mother grieving for her. I like the way you explain the viewpoint of each character. The characterizations of Inuyasha and Kagome are perfect. I love it

This was a really hard chapter to read, but i appreciate your ability to spin it into a story of redemption.

One of the best stories I have read, I absolutely loved it and I'm glad to have come across it.

Aaaaauuuuuuugggghhhhhg! The feels! The feels for this story! I love this. I love you! You made it so canonly realistic and on par with how the characters would really act! But most best of all (I meant it how I typed it) you addressed almost all the things I've been looking for! Kagome correcting the assumptions she allowed her friends to make of Inuyasha. Sango and Miroku being worried about BOTH of them. Inuyasha wearing modern clothes to go out. Kagome realizing how idiotic she is over things she fully knows and understands. Not using the sit command on him just cuz she's upset. Inuyasha finally getting upset and fed up with Kikyo's bullshit. Shippo holding at least a small amount of concern for Inuyasha and having more tact and not trying to get under Inuyasha's skin to get him in trouble. And best of all both of them actually talking about their feelings to reach understanding! And duuuude I was a bit surprised Sasaki died but snickered that Yoshida effectively blew himself up after being disembowled. I'm just happy he wasn't so stupidly conceited to think he had any chance against Inuyasha's magic attacks or sword. Now that would've been a short ass fight. Just: Swipe! Swipe! Oh. The bastard is dead. Well time to go.
Also glad that Inuyasha didn't need to revert to full demon to kill that scum. As much more quickly and gruesome Yoshida would've died he doesn't deserve the honor of such a last resort wildcard powerhouse utterly destroying him. He'd like it too much probably. And he's just a strong( worthless) human.

But as to Inuyasha believably having humans able to withstand him...yeah. But only those in his time who actively train to fight and slay full demons who are due to blood status supposedly stronger than he is. Or those like Naraku who have taken in demons. Yoshida may have been trained but he's just a killer. Too fast for fellow humans but not any demon being that's worth a damn let alone Inuyasha. The only one's who can move too fast for Inuyasha to follow completely are the beings who practically teleport. And he can move as fast as that himself sometimes. And no human strength can over power him or meet him unless they're like Bankostu. A mercanary brought back to life and altered by demon magic and the all powerful shikon jewel. I know the fight was written to last long and be interesting but in my opinion it still could have ended fairly quickly by Inuyasha either ripping or cutting off Yoshida's arms or hands any of the times he blocked him or caught his arms. Hell he could have pulled a hulk in the avengers and slammed his body hard on the ground a few times by the arm, breaking his body then kill him. Or throw his body through a few walls also breaking him but conveniently killing him by his body being impaled by something. ...I'm just sayin. *shrugs *
Totally faving this to reread one day tho!

Is she gonna be preggers?

Reunited and it feels so good!

Inuyasha should have threatened him back. Harm her in any way and all bets are off. I'm coming for you. Kill her and you're all dead.

Nah his argument is complete bullshit. He's willing to destroy a family, kill a kid, and torture /sell a living intelligent being solely for his own gain as he doesn't care about other ppl. Any arguments he has is invalid. Besides he couldn't possibly understand any of the intricate complications of wibbly wobbly timey wimey stuff. He's no Doctor. Just an archeologist.

Fuck! So close!