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emmie333
10/21/11 . chapter 13
Oops. I just read the whole story without leaving a review. Sorry! It was just so good I kept reading! ove it and can't wait to read more!
xSoulFighterx
7/30/11 . chapter 13
Aw poor Lily! I feel so bad! Why does everyone in her family have to be so mean and cruel to her? At least she has great friends and an amazing boyfriend :) I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Update soon!
Loslote
7/16/11 . chapter 13
I like how her friends were so supporting - but it's all so sad! :(
xSoulFighterx
7/6/11 . chapter 12
I love how Lily is so strong. She wants to go to her sister's wedding even though that means she will have to face her abusive parents again. I love her character (and the rest of them, too!) Update soon!
Fallen Angel211
6/25/11 . chapter 12
Awwww I hope you feel better 3 this story and update as soon as you can :)
Loslote
6/25/11 . chapter 12
Ooh, the wedding? I can't wait to see how that goes...
littlegirlgonemad
6/13/11 . chapter 11
i liked it... more to come soon, i hope:)
isigirl
6/11/11 . chapter 11
remus told his secret. i hope no one turns on him now. i love lily and james but i wonder how this will affect them. great job
Trixi-Bela Emma Meyhr
6/11/11 . chapter 11
I still didn't really like this chapter, to be completley honest. It seemed a bit "wishy-washy", if you know what I mean. I found it quite boring, uneventful and not really in-keeping with the rest of the story. The character were under-developed compared to previous chapters, as was the plot line.

The story seems to have gone on a steep decline since chapter 8, due to all the reasons mentioned above. Please go back to the previous high standard!
Loslote
6/10/11 . chapter 11
I liked it! I especially liked the chocolate discussion. :P
Trixi-Bela Emma Meyhr
6/5/11 . chapter 10
Nice but a little bit... pointless? Other than the last bit of course, but I will still keep reading, just for you :D
Loslote
6/3/11 . chapter 10
I liked the bit with Rosmerta - that's exactly how I pictured them. :P
littlegirlgonemad
6/3/11 . chapter 10
i love this story... cant wait for the next chapter!
xXHarryPotterFanaticXx
5/31/11 . chapter 9
plz i beg u write more!
xSoulFighterx
5/28/11 . chapter 9
Aww that was cute! And I love Dumbledore! He always knows what to do :) Update soon!
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