| Reviews for Thanks to a Snake |
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   JediRhydon chapter 44 . 10/23 Out of curiosity, isn’t Harry’s patronus supposed to be a wolf to symbolize Daphne’s animagus form? Because I noticed that you had it as a stag in this chapter which has me confused. |
| Noble Korhedron chapter 11 . 10/7 Do you envision the Lycurgus of this Ch. to be the historical Lycurgus of Sparta? |
| tamkikitam chapter 1 . 10/4 Don’t worry about poorer grammar or spelling. Your strengths lie elsewhere. |
| Jodie chapter 3 . 10/1 Why is he Hadrian now? He was Hardwin in the last chapter.. |
| tomascatts chapter 11 . 9/28 If you talk the way you type how in the hell does anyone ever understand what you're saying. I liked your story but cannot take the missed words, added words, and poor spelling. Thanks for trying though. I'm just going to move onto another story now |
| Snarry4life chapter 55 . 9/23 Hey. Great story. like really great story. I was a little disappointed you didn't include the Dursley's punishment. I would have like to read how the Blaise's family dealt with that! All in all Excellent story and worth the two day read lol |
| TheGoldenSpeedster chapter 1 . 9/18 Uhhhh... Hardwin isn’t a name? Hadrian is though.. |
| dprincess87 chapter 55 . 9/16 Oh. My. Gosh! That was an absolutely amazing story. I loved every moment. Thank you |
| Guest chapter 21 . 9/9 i feel like he could have gotten out of doing the tournament by just stating that his name is not Harry Potter, Harry is just his nickname, that only his friends use... therefore he had no obligation to participate... |
| 5-year-old chapter 15 . 9/8 did you write this story by having a 4-year-old writing down what you said? story is good and all, but DAAAAMN, the spelling is some of the worst i have seen in my entire life... "following out" instead of "falling out" "we'll" instead of "well" "your" instead of "you're" and countless other cringe-worthy spelling mistakes... |
| Meter man chapter 1 . 9/8 why does this harry use retard measurements instead of real measurements? only idiotic americans use feet to measure something... the rest of the world uses the metric system (aka: the superior system). |
| flowerchild33 chapter 55 . 9/1 Well I finished. Overall the plot is good and this story could have been a classic if the writing was better. It just needs a major rewrite for the copious errors. Often while reading it almost seems like translating. Still I managed for the sake of a good story with good detail. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26 Sorry if I sound a bit prickish. But You can’t grow hair from Harry’s length to shoulder length in a month, it would take about a year maybe a year and a half and this is coming from a guy with long hair so sorry |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/26 I thought Harry's name was Hardwin? |
| flowerchild33 chapter 9 . 8/26 So far liking the plot, but this really needs a beta. Seeing how old the story is though I realize it probably isn't going to happen. |