I'm just a random spectator called Spec, reading this good story. Good job on the spicy parts too! I think I got a small nosebleed from fan- girling, anyone else?

Nice. Loved the story, especially the spicy parts. ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

This wa as heck. Hope you keep up the good work!

So my friends, want me to ask a stupid question, if we may with ur permissions since i dont already have so many other projects i tell them
L: HEY! Ask honey!
Me: fine... may we make a second prt to ur story, we will give u full rights and stuff, we love this cute story, but, my friends, or friend here wamts to make a lemon, or rather have me write and be my proof reader... so i just want to ask ur permisson since its ur srory and and stuff if no its completely ok, i already jave other stuff and this gurl and has way to many requests of me, so dont feel u have to say yes lol
L: hey! I love her story! It be fun, and how dare u! I will hurt! I help u so much...
Me: yeah by smacking me...
L:dont start...miss dont know what a lemon is...
Me: that was a few times...gah...anyway, great story and like i said it would be nice to have your permission, thank you, if not then we wont do it. Still love the story. :)

I was dared to read the fanfic out loud to my class,
Everyone liked it,
Even my teacher.
I loved it,
And the "Oh.. oh, ho ho" I actually laughed like that to add effect.
-KNN

XD omg i really love this story its not to graphic like i would normally read, but it was so cute i think this story i shall come back to re read later c:

*pouting** I think there should be another... where they are, uh, doing the "experiments".
But I suppose I'll live with just this, and my imagination. xD

SQUEEDLY-SPOOCH! \o/

Yea how cute! ;)

Meanie Tallests hurt Zim's spirit but that brought him Dib, so they are forgiven

I LOVED THIS!

Excellent

XD

Win! I so regret not reading this any sooner! So so so regret it!

This story made my heart flitter. I gasped for air at the end because it was so breath-taking. I'm not trying to be cheesy or anything, it's the sheer truth! VERY CUTE! AND HOT! 333 Thanks for posting!:D

That was amazing! I just loved it!

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I cnat form porepr wrdos or snetnaces rgiht now... Mroe, Mybae?

[I Cant form proper words or sentances right now... more, maybe?]

Turn this into a two-shot pwease?

OH GOD! I am the 1st reviewer therefore I have the honor of being the first person to tell you ...THAT YOU ROCK so friggin HARD! You Zim Dib ZaDr awsomeness!