So cute, it is so cute just the way it is. But being critique , describes the sourrounding, if you did that. Sorry i probably forgot.

So cute / thanks for the story!

Unlikely situation but still true to the characters traits :) really well done!

That was amazing! I loved it, please write more!

good

awww

Doesn't blood taste like iron, not copper, eh?

Other than that, marvelous story.

Me being the total Toriko fangirl I am, I gotta say. I love you lol!

This was so awesome! And what happened at the end I could keep from laughing out loud! Keep up the good work~

sooo gooooood! xx

I really love this! The healing kisses really fit with the series because they're all so orally fixated. XD They're both so wonderfully in character! I can barely even explain why I enjoyed this so much, but I love Komatsu's careful exploration and Toriko's enthusiastic kiss as a response. The ending actually made me laugh out loud because I can totally imagine that happening. Too cute! It's sweet and funny all at once!

Thank you for this! anyone with Komatsu (he's such an uke!) is awesome!

I really appreciate!

XD

*fans self* wooooooo, toriko-san. xD

yeah, it's a little clumsy, but that's part of its charm... kinda like komatsu. i think you could have maybe gone on a bit more about komatsu's guilt and stuff so the sweetness is a bit more balanced but what the heck, they're too cute together. lol. i'm terribly excited with the new toriko fanfiction popping up and with zebra coming into the fray... *shameless giggle*

Alright! Another Toriko fic! Yay! I loved this one X ) Now we get to see more of your awesome talent in action and I gotta say I wasn't disappointed. When it comes to descriptions, you're a pro. Everything just kinda came to life haha Komatsu was adorable in all his blushing glory X D And I loved Toriko's wolfish grin and how it softened so cute! X3 Of course the best word for this fic would be hot instead of cute lol ; )

Ooh what's this? Not only do you write Zebra and Toriko with Komatsu but Coco as well? Oooh I'm definitely looking forward to that one. You wouldn't happen to be writing that one next would you? I'm a big CocoXKomatsu fan XD Thanks for the awesome fic! I can't wait to read more of your work! -

Ha! But can we see one where Tok makes the first move!

This was truly amazing! You really captured the scene, and I love the dynamic between your Komatsu and Toriko. It's just so sturdy, despite Komatsu's concern, which was truly perfect-the line "terrified of seeing Toriko's face scrunch up in disgust the way it did when he smelled something particularly foul" was just absolutely gorgeous, balancing on the edge of sorrow, wrapping up all of Komatsu's concerns and then rooting it in such a very visual, story-rooted expression-it was really impressive! Not that I'm sure I'm explaining it right, but I hope you get the idea.

Over-all, it was really perfect-like you say, they're all pretty orally focused, making it make sense! The tension of the scene is amazing, too, and pretty hot if you ask me by the time they reach the kiss, with the building tension and then, of course, Toriko forgetting that Komatsu needs to breath like a normal person. The moment of comedy fits the series perfectly as well, and again, perfectly in-character.

Thank you so much for sharing!