Reviews for Crumble
IsabellaZelda chapter 2 . 5/20/2011
Oh my...what would have happened to the team? :s I want to know, so please, please update soon! I like how the story began!
Sniggyfrumps chapter 2 . 5/20/2011
These days I seem to only go to you if one wants to read interesting fics without OCs. That's a bit sad, I think.

Anyway. I'm following this and hoping it'll be as good as your other stuff. The pacing is a bit slow, but I've always preferred my chapters hideously long so maybe I am biased.

Otto always seems a bit emo in this chapter; not his usual ridiculously optimistic self - which most speclate is a mental coping mechanism anyway so why I am bringing this up?

Also I should note you misspelled 'prologue' in the dropdown box. ó.ò

Well, I'll be following this and hoping for an adventurous downwards spiral peppered with spova. Should be nifty.
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
I already read this on dA, but I still LOVE it! *U* The top is just hilarious and really observational (just like a robot), but the bottom is so personable and foreboding, yet inviting and empowering! *U* Rock on! Love it! *U* Can't wait for more!