| Reviews for Crumble |
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IsabellaZelda chapter 2 . 5/20/2011 Oh my...what would have happened to the team? :s I want to know, so please, please update soon! I like how the story began! |
Sniggyfrumps chapter 2 . 5/20/2011 These days I seem to only go to you if one wants to read interesting fics without OCs. That's a bit sad, I think. Anyway. I'm following this and hoping it'll be as good as your other stuff. The pacing is a bit slow, but I've always preferred my chapters hideously long so maybe I am biased. Otto always seems a bit emo in this chapter; not his usual ridiculously optimistic self - which most speclate is a mental coping mechanism anyway so why I am bringing this up? Also I should note you misspelled 'prologue' in the dropdown box. ó.ò Well, I'll be following this and hoping for an adventurous downwards spiral peppered with spova. Should be nifty. |
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 5/19/2011 I already read this on dA, but I still LOVE it! *U* The top is just hilarious and really observational (just like a robot), but the bottom is so personable and foreboding, yet inviting and empowering! *U* Rock on! Love it! *U* Can't wait for more! |