VERY action packed and I loved the whole outrigger scene and flashback/flashforward you got going.

Nice chapter Bob!

Looking forward to the Pearl station.

Hooray, James and Juliet are _almost_ back together!

Let Sawyer bury Juliet with the damn ring - Locke is such a know it all - Radinsky is a brilliant idiot.

Where's Claire?

Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!

Marla

Okay I'm confused. Here's this line: "You saved me, Jack; now, he will save you," her whisper fades to unintelligible mumbles. "Your Father…"

Jack tightens his grasp to her shoulder. "My Father?" He leans an ear against her lips as she exhales her final words.

AND

Locke nonchalantly rolls up the aisle in his wheelchair and parks next to Hurley. "We'll be OK, Hugo. Sometimes it's necessary to go through the storm to make it to the other side."

His nose and pudgy cheeks form a wrinkled disapproving expression. "You're crazy dude."

THEN

Jack stares blankly at the fresh grave. "She told me to follow John Locke."

? Was Jack confused? Did he lie to Sayid? Is John Locke/Christian going to be the same person?

Mysteries abound!

It's not the chapter but Radinsky is not my favorite character (why couldn't Sawyer just shoot him?) Still very action packed and love Sayid giving direction regarding all the scientific stuff.

Carry on - you are doing splendidly.

Your first paragraph describing the aircraft gliding through the sky over the ocean was beautifully written. Bravo - nicely done.

The rest of the chapter was breathless! I donn't know how you keep track of the timelines but you are doing great. Why is everyone experiencing old injuries?

Hmmm...waiting for next chapter to find out. Nice explanstion of what the numbers were for!

Now that was action packed - kind of like "save the cheerleader - save the world" from the TV show Heros - good job

Very good action and splicing between timelines. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Now this was a chapter I really liked - great having Theresa wake up and demand Eloise's help!

Can't wait to read more! You have such great ideas for storylines. :)

"Uhh, what's tempo-rare display-ment?" says Hurley, shifting eyes with Sawyer and Jin. I love your version of Hurley - right in character.

Let the bleeding explanation begin!

It's odd that Claire can't remember Christian Shepard - very engrossing chapter - forgot that Locke didn't have a kidney...good scene

Ooh...mystery abounds...yes John...yes Claire...what did each of you do with Aaron?

Looking forward to Sayid fixing the console and of course the next chapter!

Okay...teasing with another short one...I'm interested to see what happens with Claire.

Very enjoyable chapter!

Entirely too short. More please and love Sayid's view of the hijacking!