Hi, can you believe I read the entire story today? At first I had this feeling of 'big brother is watching you' from 1984, then it veered into 'The Ship Who Sang'. Finally it was neither, but another of your wonderful original stories taking young McGee's Camaro accident as a starting point. I was rooting for Tim all along, but he was awesome as Gibbs voice in the ear, too. Have you ever written any short stories of that time? Or longer ones ...
Thanks and cheers!

I really like this one

Love your writing. Is this going to have a continuation?

Wow! That was intense and so different to other NCIS fics I've read, which is a good thing as I enjoyed it.

Too brilliant for words!

I have tears in my eyes.

That was a WONDERFUL story!

I cannot believe I never read it before!

Cant believe I havent read this before!

Certainly an interesting concept.

'Never go anywhere without a knife' is Gibbs rule N9, not 1

I really loved this story! great written characters and such a good idea to mix everything up a little :)
thank you for posting!

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loved the story you are a good writter

Just found and read this story, and wow. It was really amazing. Your depth of the characters and emotions was really great. I look forward to raiding your profile and seeing what other great stories you've written.

Thanks!

This was... Amazing. Seriously, I can't imagine it being any better. I love it! Great job!

- Very good story.

I read this awhile ago, and never did mention how much I enjoyed this. I think this is my favourite fic of yours...

Thanks for writing!