| Reviews for The Next Adventure |
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   SarahOlivier chapter 15 . 8/5 It's not Hermione's business about Teddy! You would think that she would learn about keeping her nose out of other people's business |
| Bookworm5546 chapter 24 . 8/3 This is hands down my favorite fanfic. Im reading it for the 3rd time, and it is so awesome. You did a terrific job! |
| Yeah chapter 6 . 7/3 I gave it a try but unfortunately could not make it any further. Your writing skills are lacking; grammar, vocabulary, word choice, basic story structure, basic sentence structure, it really is just a mess to read. That said, if you're as young as I think you are, it wasn't terrible. Unfortunately that means it's of "above average" quality for what you'll find on this site. That does not change the fact that this was poorly written, something I'm sure you'll agree with in retrospect as you gain further literary experience. Read some books and keep trying to write, I'm sure you'll get there. |
| Bianca di' Angelo1 chapter 32 . 2/25 Heartwarming! |
| Guest chapter 32 . 10/27/2017 excellent story |
| BeautifulD chapter 32 . 10/21/2017 wow! this fanfic is so great! loved it! I finished this in less than 24hrs. thank you thank you for this wonderful story. really love that twist in the end. hehe. looking forward to more of your fics. great job! |
| archgirl chapter 32 . 7/27/2017 Omg I loved this story so much. It is now one of my favorite and one I will read many times. Awesome story. |
| fanficoholic chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 OMG I love it! What would make it even better would b a series of outtakes like Sirius terrified of Tonks during Harry's fifth year, jumping away from her terrified that she'd trip n murder him with drapery! Lol. |
| sierra.stanley.52 chapter 31 . 5/28/2017 omg! I know all about Remus and Romulus its like my fav roman story! XD the founders of Rome right? I totally love it! |
| FawleySlytherine555 chapter 1 . 4/8/2017 Amazing I liked the new timeline |
| Hanakoori13 chapter 32 . 3/11/2017 What a great AU. . I love the way you did it. That seems like a very satisfying ending after all the feels, too. I find the idea of Harry being a Hogwarts teacher very interesting, and of course he would've made a better defense teacher, but I know that wouldn't have worked with the story. I also appreciated the way you wrote Teddy and Remus. Anyway, thanks for writing this, and I'm so glad that you posted it on fanfiction net too. . |
| This Fangirling Muggle chapter 32 . 12/16/2016 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! SO FANTASTIC. WONDERFUL TIME TRAVEL. SO AWESOME! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/14/2016 Great story The hogwarts express leaves at 11:00am on the dot btw |
| AlexisJames92 chapter 3 . 10/27/2016 OMG THE FEEEEEEEELZ Love this story. Thank you so much for writing it! |
| thegrangermalfoy chapter 32 . 8/21/2016 This was fantastic! |